The Inevitable Closeness of Proximity (Harry/Draco, PG-13)
Title: The Inevitable Closeness of Proximity
Author: maccadole
Pairing: Harry Potter/Draco Malfoy
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 3140
Content/warnings: mentioned forced bonding, bed sharing, bit of a poke while the other is asleep
Summary: One bed, two wizards and the first of seven nights.
Notes: carpemermaid, my precious friend. Happy birthday!! Thank you for being so ( Read more... )
Author: maccadole
Pairing: Harry Potter/Draco Malfoy
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 3140
Content/warnings: mentioned forced bonding, bed sharing, bit of a poke while the other is asleep
Summary: One bed, two wizards and the first of seven nights.
Notes: carpemermaid, my precious friend. Happy birthday!! Thank you for being so ( Read more... )
Omg the enticements, like, YES, my body is R E A D Y!!!! <333333 I'm snorting at the sequel title suggestion and flailing in excitement because silly!!! drarry!!!! :D :D :D
“Congratulations,” Malfoy said. “You can count.”
Omg, right off the bat the snark level is HIGH and I can feel his irritation through the screen hahaha! All while Harry is having a minor mental meltdown over the possibilities of Transfiguration and the fact that they have to share. I love how Draco is already resigned to their fate and that Harry is the one being exasperated and ~difficult hahaha! But then, ohhh, but then the tables turn and Draco gets all huffy!!!
Harry's dilemma over his comfort in the bed is hilarious. I'm actually howling at this: Harry wasn't quite up for being teased by that silk-clad twat right now.
And then I loved the detail about Draco using magic to put away his clothes and Harry being all annoyed when he dug out his own folded pile and put them away, and him batting away Draco's offending robes getting in his face.
He wanted to sleep.
Next to Malfoy.
Who was wearing silk pyjamas.
Harry hadn't worn a full set since he was a teenager. Of course Malfoy slept in a shirt that seemed tailored for him. Of course.
!!!!!! *DIES OF LAUGHTER* Only Draco Malfoy would be pretentious enough to sleep in tailored pjs, honestly. Oh my god. The tight trousers, I'm fucking dying!!!!
As if some unwritten rule said that he should face away from Malfoy at all times.
Bahahahaha, oh bed sharing trope, how I love you so! <33333
“I understand that this might be difficult for you to grasp, but it is possible to sleep without imitating earthquakes. Perhaps you could attempt to NOT wake me up every time you need to turn over? It is merely an idea, Potter, but one I suggest you take to heart unless you wish this week to be highly unpleasant for you.”
*SNORT SNORT SNORT* THE SASS. And then I really loved him rolling back over after a minute and demanding Harry not say anything lol!!!!
Ohh and I really loved the part where Draco is taking off his shirt and Harry is watching him, that whole part felt kind of ethereal with the low light of the wand and the quiet movements from Draco while Harry is watching him! I can vividly picture Draco throughout this, and I'm loving it!
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And then eeeeee, Draco being all tangled up with him when Harry woke up again! And this: In the first, soft light of dawn he looked... *swooooons* And then Harry is playing with his nipple and touching the scar and sahsdkjflhsafhdsjakfsah!!!! I'm with Guini, that was incredibly erotic and sadfhsdlakjfhdsalkfhdsa!
Malfoy's face looked a little pinched. “You better be apologising for waking me up, and not for any other sentimental reason.”
I love this so so so much!!!
“In that case, could you possibly inform me what your rough, uncouth hand is doing?”
OMFG *SNORT* !!!!!!! I've died of laughter again, RIP ME.
Harry quickly flicked a thumb over Malfoy's nipple, giving it a gentle pinch as his eyes grew wider.
“Oh,” Malfoy breathed. “So you're molesting me in my sleep, is that it?”
*INCOHERENT SCREAMING* !!!!!!!!!!!!!! HARRY. HAAARRRRYYYY. But also, Draco's reaction lmao!!!
“Ogle your artwork if you must, Potter, but don't you dare go all soppy. It's going to be a very long week if you start that now.”
Omg, I'm sorry I'm quoting all of Draco's lines back at you, but I'm just very hhnnnggg at all of his snappy dialogue!!! <33333
I really love the slow exploration Harry has going on and that Draco isn't stopping him or saying much about it, other than to warn him off bringing up the Sectumsempra scar, and that Harry can't quite find words, but knowing that he's kind of being drawn in. AND THE FINGER LICKING OMG HAHAHAHA!!!
“You...” Malfoy managed after a moment. Their lips met once again before Harry latched on to Malfoy's neck. “You owe me breakfast for waking me up twice, you disrespectful... uncivilised...”
“It's a deal,” Harry said, his prick rising and his skin flushing. Malfoy gripped his hair and ground his hips into Harry's. “Fuck, Malfoy, I'll make you breakfast for the next six days...” Harry eased back. “If you want.”
EEEEEE!! *happy flailing* And then OF COURSE Harry manages to worm his apology in anyway while he's distracting Draco with kisses and touches while they're about to get busy lol!
I adooooore this so much! Thank you so much, darling, you are a wonderful friend for spoiling me so much with this lovely gift! <333333 I am over the moon about this! <3333
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You deserve all the cliché tropes, my darling. It was so much fun to write, and you indirectly made me remember why I love writing. Aaahhh, you liked the dialogue as well! dkfghdgh you can quote however much you want, I'm so honored you felt the need to do that. Oh gosh, you said so many kind things that I don't know how to process them.
OMFG *SNORT* !!!!!!! I've died of laughter again, RIP ME.
LOLOLOL, death by fic, and practically on your birthday no less! And yet somehow I'm not that sorry. ;D
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Yay yay yayyy!!! <333 Listen, you deserve allllll of the nice things in a comment!
Thank you again for my death by fic <3333
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