Orange Collision; ch 34

Nov 12, 2011 20:41

Title: Orange Collision
Pairings: John/Paul, George/Ringo   Equal time for both pairings
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: sexual situations, drug and alcohol use, language, distressing situations
Summary: En route to Los Angeles, a storm diverts the Beatles to an uncharted island in the middle of the Pacific. Finding themselves among the few survivors, romantic ( Read more... )

the beatles, john/paul, fic: orange collision, george/ringo

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windywisp November 13 2011, 18:35:56 UTC
yay, an update <3

idgsjfgjd John sleeping omg i CANt gsf

Tucker ugh he just really makes my stomach crawl he's like john but NOT in a very bad way dgdfgdfg

but ye loving the sex den (NO MATTER WHAT PAUL SAYS)

John’s eyes were darting between Paul, Tucker, the guitar and Frisby-the sharpness in their gaze made him feel like he was being pricked by needles every time they landed on him.



OOOOHHHHH

Tucker turned towards Frisby, “Can you feel how sexually charged this conversation is?”

lol tucker how about you shut the fuck upsdffhGHJGFHSDG

UGH that entire fighting scene oh my fucking god that was really good, well BAD, but well-written and i could see that happening and omg

BUT NO PAUL
NO
DON'T DO IT
hgfshsdfd
Really, really good chapter! I liked all the emotions and dialogue in it. :'D I can't wait for the next one <3

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macca44552 November 19 2011, 22:42:51 UTC
INDEED MY WONDERFUL FRIEND, SHIT DID JUST GET REAL.

AND, HAHA, YOUR HATRED FOR TUCKER AMUSES ME TO NO END. >:D

HOPEFULLY I SHALL BE ABLE TO WHIP UP THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON. SCHOOL IS RAPE.

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