One of my Moonridge endeavours for last year was an annotated version of my story 'The Children of Cascade'. One of these days I'll get around to figuring out the formatting to upload it to my website, but for now, I'm lazy and I will simply send it out to anyone who's interested. The file's a 700 kb word file, and there's a separate file with a few pics gathered from various places to illustrate my ideas of culture and character, which I won't upload later because I have no rights to the pics concerned.
I wrote about 8,000 words of commentary, and I'm happy to answer any specific questions about world building or story intentions if they aren't answered for you in the story notes.
So, comment here, or else mail me at mabinbrowne at gmail dot com, and I'll send both files to you.
This entry was originally posted at
http://mab-browne.dreamwidth.org/247147.html. Comments are welcome there too. :-)