Drabble and dribble

Oct 14, 2009 22:56

I have a whole seven hundred and thirty words written for my Spook Me story. It's not much, but it's a start, and at least now I think I have an actual *story* idea and structure in my head as opposed to an interesting concept. Progress. That's good because - deadline ( Read more... )

drabbles, gen, stories and writing 2009

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janedavitt October 14 2009, 11:50:57 UTC
Oh poor Blair! You really capture his despair here and that last line is an absolute killer.

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mab_browne October 14 2009, 17:59:12 UTC
I like to think of that scene as GM trying to offer viewers the continuity leading from Sentoo that the writing did not. Thanks for the fb. :-)

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krossero October 14 2009, 12:41:06 UTC
I love this. It's very plausible--I can imagine that any loss of control at that point in time would not be something Blair was cool with.

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mab_browne October 14 2009, 18:00:34 UTC
If you accept that there's even a modicum of truth in Blair's remark about being in therapy when he was in pampers, then it's plausible that Murder 101 could be something of a break point for him. Thanks. :-)

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escargoat October 14 2009, 22:01:44 UTC
LOL - Spook Me has been EVIL this year. Which is kinda ironic come to think of it...

And now you've made me hanker for a Blair developing a water phobia story.

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mab_browne October 15 2009, 01:08:19 UTC
Spook Me is always evil. I don't think I've had an easy write yet.

you've made me hanker for a Blair developing a water phobia story
There must be some out there. Storyfinders maybe?

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roslynsmuse October 15 2009, 18:54:36 UTC
Fantastic replay of that entire scene.

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mab_browne October 15 2009, 18:57:32 UTC
Thanks very much. :-)

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prudence_dearly October 17 2009, 22:04:10 UTC
Who would have thought that so much air could feel like water?
This is a very powerful drabble, and that last line is stellar.

(Hi, I'm one disk into the first season. Expect to see me popping up in the comments to your TS fics in days to come :)

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mab_browne October 22 2009, 08:31:11 UTC
Late with my reply, but here at last. :-) Thanks so much for the comment. As far as the fic is concerned - um, I kind of learned to write in TS (and am still learning), so be patient with the earlier stuff. *g*

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