All's Fair Part 4

[mab_browne]

All's Fair, J/B slash, AU
This section took a long time to get here - but I bring sex. R, AO, NSFW, whichever expression you prefer...

Comments

[betagoddess]

It's great to see another chapter! *g*

[mab_browne]

I'm certainly relieved. ;-)

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

[weggsley]

::happy sigh::. I love this story so much! :-)

Re: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

[mab_browne]

I'll do my best to keep you supplied...*eg*

[laurie_ky]

Of course Jim would be effected by the sea all around him. Good descriptions of life at sea during those times. I hope Jim tells Blair what is bothering him because I think Blair would supply other worse reasons. The need to be silent and in the dark during sex was well written.
Laurie

[mab_browne]

You're quite right that Blair is wondering what's going on, and I think I have an idea for the next bit. And really, I just wanted to play with Jim's open water phobia from The Rig. Thank you kindly.

[tesserae_]

*loves*

Loved the slow rhythmic pacing of this - it fits your setting perfectly, their lovemaking at the end, too...

[mab_browne]

Oh, I'm glad this works for readers, because it was a total pain in the backside to write. *wipes brow*

[snailbones]

Oh lush... that was so beautiful. ::happy sigh::

[mab_browne]

Glad you liked.