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False Illusion - Aoi/Ruki - Oneshot

Mar 28, 2009 05:18

Title: False Illusion
Chapters: Oneshot
Author: maazuki_kei
Genre: Angst, drama (ish?), light romance
Warning(s): Male on Male, cussing
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Characters: Aoi/Ruki
Band(s): the GazettE
Synopsis: He sprawled out on the couch, pressing himself as far as he could into the back of it. He squeezed his eyes shut as he tried desperately to come up ( Read more... )

writings!:slash, writings!:fanfic, writings!:the gazette

Comments 13

murmeldyr March 28 2009, 21:03:41 UTC

wth Ruki cheating :v

murmeldyr March 28 2009, 21:03:58 UTC

ops, forgot to say: I loved it ;D
xD

maazuki_kei March 29 2009, 01:30:26 UTC

Ah, sorry. ^^;; I can't help it. I just see Ruki cheating unless he's with Reita. x3

Thanks for reading though. ^^ Glad you loved it. <3

kouri0201 March 28 2009, 23:03:34 UTC

This is really sweet and slightly bitter at the same time.
Nicely written and I like how you give these hints about Ru and Rei and one can really fel how much Aoi tries to ignore it...

Reall ynice!
Thanks for sharing!!

maazuki_kei March 29 2009, 02:00:27 UTC

Thanks. ^^ I was wondering whether or not I got Aoi's part right. x3

Thanks for reading. ^^

n3uromanc3r March 29 2009, 00:00:21 UTC

Oh, it was very suspicious when he made that coffee by the taste of someone else...
I'm very curious why they keep up the façade that everything is ok between them, if in reality it's not...
Actually the one I don't really understand in this situation is Aoi. He exactly knows what's happening, and knows Ruki doesn't know he already realized it. And it seems he enjoys playing with Ruki, he tortures him but he doesn't let him tell the truth. As if he already decided he will share Ruki in order not to lose him.

Thank you very much! I really enjoyed it!

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maazuki_kei March 29 2009, 01:57:39 UTC

The only reason I can come up with for why they're still together is that deep down, whatever love they had for each other in the beginning is still there. Or at least it is for Aoi. So, yes, I guess Aoi has decided he'd rather share Ruki (or just pretend it isn't happening) than let him go. I feel Ruki only has a spark of it left though, and that's why he's not able to completely break it off with Aoi.

Glad you enjoyed it. ^^v Thanks for reading.

kawasakininja March 29 2009, 00:16:55 UTC

I wanted to read this because I saw it was Aoi/Ruki, which I usually never read but I'm trying to broaden my horizons, only to see it turning into Reita/Ruki :)))
Overall, I liked it. The tense, suffocating atmosphere, Aoi loosing his temper... Very interesting.

maazuki_kei March 29 2009, 01:51:59 UTC

lol Yeah, I was sort of hoping that it might bring more feeling into the fic if I didn't put Reita/Ruki in the pairings. You know, to give readers a curveball? Or something like that. x3

Thanks for reading. ^^

kawasakininja March 29 2009, 08:52:03 UTC

Oh, I think you definitely succeeded doing that :)

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maazuki_kei April 11 2009, 04:43:28 UTC

Yeah... I sorta felt bad doing that to Aoi... *sigh* But whatever my muses call for, they will get (maybe. If I keep at it and don't give up x3 lol)