ENG - [YabuxInoo] - Merry-Go-Round Goes 4(b) - Rejection

Jul 23, 2015 20:49

Title : Merry-Go-Round Goes
Chapter : 4(b)/8
Pairing(s)/Fandom : Yabu Kota x Inoo Kei / Hey! Say! JUMP, NEWS, Kisumai, more to come
Author : ma_rendezvous
Genre : AU. Romance
Rating : NC-17
Warning : Explicit content. Dirty words. Slight mention of use of drugs. A paraphrased version of Pretty Woman (1991)
Disclaimer : The main story belongs to Garry Marshall's ( Read more... )

!yabuxinoo, *hey!say!jump, ~series, - eng

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singchronight0 July 24 2015, 18:22:50 UTC
Are you ok?
Becareful, don't involve yourself in stupid accident again :)

'Who the hell is Yuta?'
Woooow! Yabu is getting jealous?

Inoo is really pretty badass!
He wondered how it would be if he had sex with Hikaru!
Then do it!
His existence enlightened the tensed atmosphere between Yabu and Yaotomes a bit xD

Grand father Yaotome was kind, when Inoo asked Yabu if he could take photos of food, the grand father Yaotome didn't look down nor make Inoo feel embarass.

Hikaru was coooool!
When he said f-word to Yabu xD
I thought he met his match!

“Where’s the rice?” Inoo asked, whispering this time. But in fact Hikaru was still able to hear him that the young brunette turned his gaze towards him and watched him in silence.
What was Hikaru thinking at that moment?

I support Yaotomes to protect their company from capitalists, but I don't want to see Yabu's failure either ;_;

Inoo was cute, so.cute like a kitten ;_;

The scene Yabu was trying to kiss Inoo's lips twice but got rejected ;_; OMG ;_;

But Inoo was still staring at him, with his brown irises directed to his darker ones. Yabu swore there was sadness in them,
Why? Why there was sadness in Inoo's eyes?
Hope you will let me know the reason of his sadness in the future chapter.

Yabu and Inoo were playing ON the piano ;_;
The businessman knew how to use the piano in creative way! XD

Thank you for this chapter :)

Take your time and take care yourself!

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ma_rendezvous July 26 2015, 14:02:11 UTC
I SO LOVE YOUR COMMENT I THINK I'M GONNA CRY (;;w;;)
I love it that you see through and not miss the small things between the lines! Not many recognizes these trivias like you do, and I feel really appreciated (TwT) *hug real tight*

To sum it up, the forth chapter is all about rejection...
When Inoo was rejected by the shop he visited, Yabu who rejected his building sympathy towards the Yaotomes, when the Yaotomes rejected to be bought by Yabu's corporate raid, again when Yabu rejected Inoo's offer, and when Inoo rejected Yabu's kiss... so yeah, basically everything hurts X""""D

I'm not gonna reply much further right now or else I would spoil everything... so please bear a little while until all the clouds and mists get a little clearer (or even thicker?) XDD

Can I ask something? It's a stupid question but I wonder... In whose side are you in, if you could choose? XDD

And thank you for your concern (;;w;;)
I'm doing good!

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singchronight0 July 27 2015, 04:03:34 UTC
It's good to hear that you're doing good :)

Ok, I got it! That's why thins chapter named 'rejected'. Because all of them got rejected.
Great! :)

[Spoiler (click to open)]Can I ask something? It's a stupid question but I wonder... In whose side are you in, if you could choose? XDD
You know well that it's hard to choose lol
I think I'm in Yabu's side xD
I love both Yabu and Hikaru, but the businessman Yabu Kota who wearing jetblack Armani suit,with unreadable smile, is irresistible.
Because of his character, his life almost looks perfect, living in New York, as the heir of the Yabu, his future should be bright, but I feel it's dark somehow.
I think Yabu has a good heart, but good heart isn't good for dealing in business world.
Besides, he can't let anyone see him in weak state, because he's the CEO, so he has to be strong all 24/7.
Whether he success in buying Yaotome's company.
I think he won't be happy of what he's done.
But he feels bad for buying the Yaotome's business.
He's realized that the Yaotome gave things back and helped the others, charity and etc...
(They will get some supporters, I think)
While his father's company will never ever do that.
But being the heir of Yabu, he can't just run away or do something reckless, he can't be irresponsible.
Is it lucky or unlucky for being CEO, for being the heir? XD

Being with Inoo, it seems Yabu can let his dark side/stress out a bit.
I hope Inoo can be Yabu's little oasis, or in the other hand, the troublemaker? xD

I hope Yabu will be able to smile with his no-eye-smile in the end.


Sorry for babbling.

I'm looking forward to chapter 5.

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