Owned Part One

[m_l_frost]

Ryan seethed inwardly as Brendon approached him, microphone clutched in his hand, trademark smirk fixed in place.  The screaming pre-teen girls lapped it up as Brendon leant in close and sang the words that Ryan had written directly into the skin on his neck.  Brendon knew that the timid guitarist would submit to it as usual, he knew that sweet,

Comments

[ixsawxgodxcry]

Wow... There is gonna be more right?

[m_l_frost]

Wow a person commenting on my story! This is so exciting! Sorry...I have not done this before. Dork.

Yes I have loads more written already but wasn't sure so thought I would just post a wee little bit of it but now I shall post more. Hoorah!

[ixsawxgodxcry]

Are you Scottish by any chance just with the wee you said lol. If so me too lol. This was written so well you should definitely post some more like seriously. I will follow this fic... can't find th eword I'm looking for . twill come to me. Faithfully thats it i think lol. I'm adding you as a friend btw hope that's ok. XO

[m_l_frost]

A comment and a friend all in one day! This is all too much!

No I am afraid I am English but I am a fan of the Scots! I posted more story on my journal and I tried to do the linking thing into SATD but I don't think it worked or something. My Livejournal skills are...well nil. I will try again tomorrow but you might be able to read it in my journal I think...dunno. Anyway yeah, thanks again. You're a lovely human being :)

[andinthemoment]

that was like
super duper yay!
i like it

[m_l_frost]

Another person read my story! Woo hoo! And thank you! And I will post more!

[andinthemoment]

im excited!
if you werent gunna post more
i would have to pout
and thats never good...

[m_l_frost]

Awww come on now...it's good when Brendon does it.

Anyway I posted more on my journal but think I fucked up the SATD link thing so will try again.

Thanks for being excited! Excitement = Good.

[mansouplover]

this one sounds like it is going to be really good...keep writing for sure:)

[m_l_frost]

*GRIN* Thank you so much! And okay!

Sorry, I have not gotten over the whole "Wow people are reading my story" syndrome yet!

More posted on my journal but not on SATD I don't think. Still trying to figure out Livejournal.

[carcrashheartzx]

oh, i like it. and im glad there's gonna be more! =]
i just wish they didn't smoke weed. thats not kool =[

[m_l_frost]

A whole nother person. Yey!

Glad you liked the story. Sorry about the weed...needed to chill Bden out somehow!

[asphodele_vigne]

this story seems really interesting, I'm definitely excited to read more!!

[m_l_frost]

Hi thanks loads, Hope you found the next bit!