Fic: Can I Pet it?

Jul 22, 2009 13:37

Can I Pet it?
By: M14Mouse
Summary: Luan wants to pet his bro’s animal spirit. Theo isn’t too keen on the idea.
Disclaimer: Don’t own them.
Sibling Love Theme: 41. Cold

Can I Pet it? )

character: theo, challenge: sibling love, character: luan, fic, show: power rangers

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tsukino_akume July 22 2009, 19:03:53 UTC
-Squees- Adorable! Thank you for cheering me up!

I love how Luan immediately notices a difference between Theo's jaguar and Lily's cheetah, as well as the fact that he whines until Theo gives into him and his 'look'. (I'm guessing Lu's the younger twin.) And Theo's description of of the Zords is beautiful. Also, Lily and Casey naming their spirits is ♥.

Now I want to know what everyone's named their spirits. -Giggles- So does Luan get to name Theo's? ^_~

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m14mouse July 22 2009, 21:48:18 UTC
I am soo glad that I cheered you up. ^___^ I have no clue who is younger or older. In my stories, I often put Luan as the oldest and Theo as the youngest. Luan knows how to push Theo's buttons...and he knows that whining will drive Theo nuts.

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I think I am going to write a sequel now. :-P

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serpentine85 July 23 2009, 06:07:51 UTC
*giggles* this is so cute!
I love the way you've brought through the affectionate tone in their interactions.
And as for Lilly naming things ♥ I do that too!

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m14mouse July 23 2009, 22:12:09 UTC
LOL! Then you will love the sequel that I have planned. XD They really do love each other...even if they like to drive each other nuts((But aren't all families like that.)) Anyway, thanks for the review.

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arytra July 23 2009, 07:20:36 UTC
Oh my! So beyond cute! And I can so see Lily naming things and Luan trying to pet the animal spirit. Wonderful story!

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m14mouse July 23 2009, 22:13:31 UTC
Thanks. ^___^ I am really glad you enjoy it.

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