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havocthecat December 2 2006, 01:56:26 UTC
You realize that I totally and completely love this story, right? It's absolutely perfect! Thank you! *glees and goes to reread* (And yours is here.)

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lyssie December 2 2006, 03:42:41 UTC
Yay! *dances with glee*

(ALSO YAY)

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daisycm83 December 2 2006, 02:00:05 UTC
You wrote Lizziefic. I am so happy.

I love this. I love the fanciful side of it, because I think Elizabeth has a side like that and Atlantis brings it out when she's not too busy keeping her head above water.

This bit, in particular, hit me as being exactly, perfectly right: She is a legend. Or will be, though she's not sure she wants to know what the history books will say about her. Perhaps too little. And perhaps too much.

Also, randomly? I miss Holling.

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lyssie December 2 2006, 03:44:55 UTC
*dances* Thank you =)

I couldn't help but think that Liz would be fanciful, sometimes. There's so much that goes on her head that we never see--seriously, I bet half the time she's running meetings, she's contemplating things that have nothing to do with supplies.

I hated Holling. But I do kinda miss him.

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amitee December 2 2006, 02:05:30 UTC
This is excellent. Thank you for sharing it. :-)

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lyssie December 2 2006, 03:45:41 UTC
Thank you =)

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aj December 2 2006, 02:12:33 UTC
YAY! I like this. It's much stronger. The fleshing out did it good. I do like the Teyla interaction but, strangely, my favorte section is the last one. PETER. But I love the idea of Atlantis not being her Waterloo.

*gives you cookies and warm blankies*

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lyssie December 2 2006, 03:46:51 UTC
Good! I was a bit lazy, in the beginning. And, and, then I did thinking (with you both prodding at me). I MISS PETER. I realized this when I put him in there.

Lizzie's Waterloo won't be for another ten or twenty years.

*snuggles*

Thank you =!

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lyssie December 2 2006, 15:30:23 UTC
Thank you =)

And, again, thank you massively for the prodding and beta work. =)

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