I love this. I love the fanciful side of it, because I think Elizabeth has a side like that and Atlantis brings it out when she's not too busy keeping her head above water.
This bit, in particular, hit me as being exactly, perfectly right: She is a legend. Or will be, though she's not sure she wants to know what the history books will say about her. Perhaps too little. And perhaps too much.
I couldn't help but think that Liz would be fanciful, sometimes. There's so much that goes on her head that we never see--seriously, I bet half the time she's running meetings, she's contemplating things that have nothing to do with supplies.
YAY! I like this. It's much stronger. The fleshing out did it good. I do like the Teyla interaction but, strangely, my favorte section is the last one. PETER. But I love the idea of Atlantis not being her Waterloo.
Good! I was a bit lazy, in the beginning. And, and, then I did thinking (with you both prodding at me). I MISS PETER. I realized this when I put him in there.
Lizzie's Waterloo won't be for another ten or twenty years.
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(ALSO YAY)
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I love this. I love the fanciful side of it, because I think Elizabeth has a side like that and Atlantis brings it out when she's not too busy keeping her head above water.
This bit, in particular, hit me as being exactly, perfectly right: She is a legend. Or will be, though she's not sure she wants to know what the history books will say about her. Perhaps too little. And perhaps too much.
Also, randomly? I miss Holling.
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I couldn't help but think that Liz would be fanciful, sometimes. There's so much that goes on her head that we never see--seriously, I bet half the time she's running meetings, she's contemplating things that have nothing to do with supplies.
I hated Holling. But I do kinda miss him.
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*gives you cookies and warm blankies*
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Lizzie's Waterloo won't be for another ten or twenty years.
*snuggles*
Thank you =!
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And, again, thank you massively for the prodding and beta work. =)
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