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lyrangalia in lyric_nonsense

Divergence Redux: Porcelain

Jun 30, 2008 23:44

It was an oppressively hot day even by Rush Valley standards, when even the most dedicated automail engineers left their workshops to seek refuge in the relative cool of dimmed and shuttered storefronts. The blond man, clad in heavy military blues, winced as he stepped out of the train depot’s shadow and offered up a silent prayer that he wouldn’t ( Read more... )

divergence, fullmetal alchemist, fanfiction

Comments 23

raunchdressing July 1 2008, 13:47:32 UTC

x.x;; I thought Divergence was heartwrenching. This is so sad for everybody involved 8(

lyrangalia July 1 2008, 16:12:46 UTC

Being left behind might have been worse than being stranded. Still, Winry's making a life for herself with what she's got, so that's something. Thanks for reading!

syolen July 1 2008, 15:08:35 UTC

This is so sad for everyone !
Great job on this ! :)

lyrangalia July 1 2008, 16:16:01 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it! Sorry it took so long; Winry was amazingly reticent when it came to telling me about what happened after the boys left (not that I blame her given how it ended up).

Thanks for reading still!

ambivalentlight July 1 2008, 21:48:53 UTC

*cough* Wow, impressive. XD I'm curious to see what else you will post later.
And while I'm at it, let me go take a look at Divergence.

lyrangalia July 2 2008, 00:27:18 UTC

Glad you enjoyed this, and I hope you like Divergence. People have told me it's a long, well-researched stomp on Ed's heart.

evil_little_dog July 10 2008, 05:10:42 UTC

Yeah, that's a good summary of it.

cornerofmadness July 3 2008, 02:57:43 UTC

and i was just wondering if i remembered to send you my beta....

still love this

lyrangalia July 3 2008, 03:18:31 UTC

*grin* Yes you did. I was just a lazy bum and couldn't get off my ass to post it. But since you helped me figure out the sequel to this, figured I should post before I get the sequel done. *laugh*

Glad you liked (and I'm going through the backlog of fic).

cornerofmadness July 3 2008, 03:23:38 UTC

oh you're gonna blame ME are you :-)

i'm sure i have some to post myself

dreamer1789 July 3 2008, 15:08:21 UTC

What a way to blast-start the sequel! XD Damn, I want to hug Winry to death now. That was a great chapter, neat style too.
You do know that no doubt future chapters will need a blazing neon pink tissue warning, right? 'Cause this one was ok, but knowing Divergence and all... ;)

lyrangalia July 4 2008, 06:01:06 UTC

I know! I was heartbroken when Winry's story started to take shape, and I couldn't believe how she evolved without the Elrics around. *hugs her*

As for the blazing neon pink tissue warning, I thought the mere mention of it being in the Div-verse would make that clear! :D

dreamer1789 July 4 2008, 07:38:20 UTC

Lol, indeed the mention of it being Divergence is warning enough for those who know it - I was more thinking about the innocent souls who are new to the scene, it happens. ;) Lol, as for me, the moment I read it being Div I had two reactions: 1) AWESOME (& 'that was fast'), 2) 'Where is my "I hate BONES"-badge?' XD

Anyway, looking forward to more evolved!Winry. ^^

evil_little_dog July 10 2008, 11:19:39 UTC

'Where is my "I hate BONES"-badge?'

Ooo, I want one of those!