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lyra_sena

F&F fic: No Net Below

Apr 23, 2005 13:17

For nifra_idril, on the occasion of her 21st birthday, albeit a tad late. Love you, my darling.

Title: No Net Below
Fandom: Fast and the Furious
Pairing: Brian/Dom
Summary: Dom could take him, Brian knows, but maybe they both want to see just how far Brian’s going to push this.
Thanks: to makesmewannadie and shrift for fantastic beta.

( No Net Below )

Comments 48

pearl_o April 23 2005, 18:28:54 UTC

You did it! Yay!

I know nothing about this fandom, but every time you write, it makes me wish you did it more.

lyra_sena April 24 2005, 13:33:56 UTC

*hugs you so tight* You have no idea how much I adore you. Thank you for reading even though you have no clue about who these boys are! And thank you for your sweet words. *mwah*

wistfuljane April 23 2005, 19:13:02 UTC

I can't pinpoint exactly what I like about this fic. It's rare to read a fic in Brian's POV in this fandom and this makes me want to see more. I like his voice in this. And...yes.

lyra_sena April 24 2005, 13:38:55 UTC

Thank you! I enjoyed writing it.

dirty_diana April 23 2005, 23:54:00 UTC

This is nice. Warm and breathing. I like your Brian in this a lot.

And - fb that ends by pimping me a community generally makes me nervous - but you should tell people about this one at quarter_mile. If you want to. Or whatever.

lyra_sena April 24 2005, 13:39:31 UTC

Thank you so much! I'll check out quarter_mile, thanks for the heads up!

nifra_idril April 24 2005, 09:28:01 UTC

omg it's 5:30 AM and i'm way not sober and my phone is far from me but i love this, as well you know, and love that you did this FOR ME OMG MEME ALSOBRIANDOMOMGHOTWTF!?!?!?

*loves you and DOES NOT USE THE SYMBOL despite severe temptation*

(will call you late sunday!!!)

lyra_sena April 24 2005, 13:40:39 UTC

I did this all for you!! For your birthday!! I'm so glad you've had such a great weekend!! *twirls you*

Love you, baby girl.

china_shop April 24 2005, 10:21:51 UTC

Oh this is excellent (and I haven't seen the film). You have such precise, beautiful images:

Five minutes later, Brian’s pulling up outside an old building that droops in the heat, even in the middle of the night.

and

On the drive to Mexico, he kept thinking about how smooth and cool his badge had felt when he laid it on the table in front of Tanner. How his gun was heavy and the clip echoed in the room when he popped it out. All night he’d reached up automatically to adjust his shoulder holster, and was surprised every time it wasn’t there.

Wow. :)

lyra_sena April 24 2005, 13:32:56 UTC

*snugs you* awww, thank you darlin, for reading! Now you need to see the movie! It's umm -- not that great, but OMGTHEY'REJUSTSOHOT.