[FIC] Life is perfect as it is

Jun 24, 2011 14:58

Title: Life is perfect as it is
Characters: Donghae, Kibum
Rating: G
Wordcount: 1.319
Summary: Kibum only knows a guy in his university, Donghae knows multiple Kibums or none at all.
A/N: This is another spinoff to the Go!Stop series that started with Life would be perfect if we had these. This story continues on Donghae's life after he's made the Reset ( Read more... )

donghae, super junior, one-shot, kibum

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paradigm_twist June 24 2011, 16:40:15 UTC
Oh gosh. The poor thing. No one remembers because of the reset and he's stuck in a limbo. And a bunch of mixed memories :/

Reread Life after reading this to get a clearer idea and man, it's gets sadder. I like how you write this. With the whole 'time-travel' analogy (sort of) and its paradox. Now it just makes me feel bad for ever thinking about how I used to want having those buttons. Now I rather have one that prolongs time. Sleep deprivations does that to you =.=

Thanks for sharing! ^^

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lyntia June 24 2011, 16:43:31 UTC
I don't know why I keep making Hae suffer like this.. ;____; Poor thing needs someone to love him and cuddle him tightly but I never give him anyone. D:

I think one day I will reread LWBPIWHT and every sequel & spin off I wrote for it by then, to see if this universe is still as cool then as it feels to me right now. It'll probably be a big disappointment. ;A;

Thanks for reading ♥

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paradigm_twist June 24 2011, 17:15:00 UTC
You can give him to me 8D *bricks self*

Pfft. Of course it's cool. Instead of mem-ing this, I saved them all under Word doc. That way, I can reread them whenever even without the internet. You have a wonderful AU that's so interestingly written that I'm forever in awe of your writings. Don't you dare say it's a disappointment. *forms angry mob*

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lyntia June 24 2011, 18:56:25 UTC
/donates you the Go!Stop Donghae lol New girlfriend in next sequel will be named ... paradigm? XDDDD Original naming FTW! xD

Oh my gosh you have them saved in word files? That's such a big compliment! *-*

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paradigm_twist June 25 2011, 13:49:35 UTC
HAHA. Paradigm with a slight twist. Always with the twist to keep things interesting ;)

Yes I do. My writings are ok. But I totally admire yours. I strive to be at your level someday *bows* I love your fics. I just comment under a different name. I used to comment under my FB account. Now I just comment under this LJ one ^^ Not sure if you remember or not. But yea :) Been reading your works for a while now. Always find something to think about when I read them~

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lyntia June 29 2011, 01:28:46 UTC
Twists keep things interesting indeed. But honestly I have no idea what paradigm means haha.

Honestly, there's people I think are way above my level of writing, but after a while, when people compliment you enough, you get to think that maybe you're already at that level, you just can't see it for yourself because you under-value your own creations. ^.^ So you're probably already at the goal you're striving for.

Ohhh, you're the one commenting with the FB account before? /goes to check/ Uhh.. Sook Kwan Loong or something? xD -short term memory is short- That's totally awesome! :D I love you for reading all my stories like that. Such a dedicated reader! ;A;

I'm glad you find something to think about while reading. I strive to write stories that aren't just stories, but can bring a message or a feeling over to others. At least with my one-shots & drabbles I do. The novels are really just stories haha~

Sorry for the late reply, by the way, school stuff suddenly stormed at me like woah~

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paradigm_twist June 30 2011, 17:31:23 UTC
Paradigm(n):
1. A typical example or pattern of something; a model.
2. A worldview underlying the theories and methodology of a particular scientific subject.

It was something some friends and I came out up during high school. The name kinda stuck on with me even after I graduated :)

I'm aiming for a different style. Yours is more thought-provoking which is what I really like about. My style is more emotions-focused so there's this huge gap in between LOL But thank you for the sagely words ^^

YES :D Ah well. It's better than having no memories whatsoever ;) What can I say? I love your style. It speaks to me like a siren call <3 ( ... )

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lyntia June 30 2011, 19:44:47 UTC
Ahhh thanks for clearing that up. xD So you're a typical example or pattern, a model, but you're not just straight ahead, you have turns & twists? xD Good to know~ :P

Well if you write in a different style then there is completely no comparing of our works possible so you should not try to be at my level. Try to be at someone's level who writes like you lol. Or just try to be at the best level you can get at, because comparing to others is never the way! :D

I'm glad you like my style. I'm glad there's so many who do. I mean when I started writing I was like "no one will ever read this seriously" but look at me now haha.

Well.. My stamina dries up over time too. There's just sometimes it doesn't. Right now I have 2 ongoing novels which I have no inspiration for anymore whatsoever. All writing inspiration just died after exams. I hope it will come back during holidays...or after my vacation. x]

I'm going off this Sunday on my vacation so I won't have any time at all either haha. Holidays started today ^.^

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paradigm_twist July 1 2011, 14:12:25 UTC
Because nothing good in life can be gotten with smooth straight roads =P

Hard to get the comparing mindset out of the way. Asian families just have that mindset drilled in thoroughly since like forever. I would like to try writing with your style someday though. Someday. In a far distant future xD

HAHA. I feel you. I had that same reaction as well. But so far, it's been alright ^^

Good luck with that! I can imagine your mind just going into shut down mode after the exams. Those are mind-sucking devices I tell you D: It's just horrible :/

\o/ AWESOME. Where are you heading to?

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