[FIC] Life would be perfect if we had these

[lyntia]

Title: Life would be perfect if we had these
Characters: Donghae, Hyukjae, Kibum
Rating: G
Wordcount: 3.145
Summary: Life is not what it used to be and as he starts to pick up the pieces, he wants to go back more and more.
A/N: So this concludes my newest one-shot which I have spent a few days on writing. Many thanks to my betareader for keeping up with

Comments

[lyntia]

adjzkhegfkjhg I'm still kind of like high on idek what. xD Your comment made me spazz so much and feel so ... proud. /sounds kind of pathetic now/ Haha thank you for all the compliments, really, I don't know what to say. ;A; Thank you so much! ♥

I'm really kind of awed by you saying you can't believe I like your writing. I think we're both maybe kind of underestimating our own writing and overestimating the other's? xD After all; this fic of mine came out after reading yours, so in some way they are connected~? I can't believe you read it three times over just because (I did that too, but that was to make sure there were no spelling or grammar errors left..) ajdhhgrjhg I'm still spazzing hahaha.

I felt sometimes while writing that the story might have been a little rushed, but then as I thought about it; I couldn't make it any other way. It was not supposed to become more than a one-shot and so I didn't want to put in too much details all over. Yet I couldn't leave it too undetailed, because I assumed the au would then become too confusing for the readers. I'm glad you felt it was really understandable and you seem to have picked out the important things I wanted to put into this story as well.

As for the ending; I first wanted to like .. make him live on in the Go!Stop world without Kibum, perhaps even have him get swallowed by the void as well. But as I wrote and Hae's character stabilised itself, I realised he would never get into his own invention and then the idea of a reset button just announced itself to me. When I thought of that, things just seemed to click into place. He made a device to control time, things went completely wrong, so he puts his whole life into making something that would undo everything. I'm really glad with how the ending turned out. Although I wanted to emphasize a little more that Donghae was going to try his best to contact Kibum again, I had no idea how to make it clearer without writing another part, so it is how it is now haha.

Thank you so much for your comment, really, it gave me so much will & courage to write more in this verse. I'm personally really fond of it as well and it gives so many possibilities for other fics; so many open parts that can be filled in. I have some vague ideas around Siwon in Go!Stop world and Kihae afterwards. Also really interested something Hyukjae centric, but not sure yet how to get to that.

Do look forward to something in the (not so near) future that would follow up on this. ^.^ And thank you again, you can't imagine how happy and confident your comment made me. ♥

[drawingintheair]

Don't even mention it lol. I don't think I would have read this had you not linked me to it so thank you for letting me know about it :)

I think you're right. We both have different writing styles and this was just so refreshing to read. You really blew me away not even exaggerating. This was a delight to read. This came out of reading one of my fics? Omg which fic was that?

For me at least, I think you included all the right details. Everything added to the story line and seemed essential and not some "filler" scene. I also love how Donghae is the only one to remember what happened. It wouldn't make sense any other way and I really liked how it took me a moment to thread together the fact that he had reset time in that last segment.

As I said, I really loved the ending. I saw the possibility of him being swallowed by the void or just living there as you said, but the ending you decided to give was perfect. I did get the sense he was going to try to contact Kibum but I like how you mentioned it sort of in passing but made me take note of it that Donghae did care enough to want to find him and possibly reforge their friendship.

I'm really glad my comment makes you want to write more of this because this is absolutely wonderful and has so much room for more. Would be totally looking forward to a Hyukjae centric fic and some Kihae <3 (lol I never thought I'd say that)

Take your time with the follow up. I'm sure that when it does come up it will be awesome ♥

[lyntia]

This came after reading the four fics you had posted up in the new community, actually. Or well, three, since I didn't get to reading the one about Hyukjae and the leopard print yet before writing because this popped in my mind and forced its way out. xD I love the way you write because there's so much feeling involved together with the actual story. I'm not just reading, I'm also feeling, if that makes sense, and when I feel, I write. So that's how you inspire me to write haha. I guess I'm glad that the one who wrote something that inspired me to write this, actually likes what I wrote because of her. xD

At first I was wondering. Have him remember or not? But then I figured there should be some link to him resetting stuff, or no one would realise. Making everyone remember wouldn't make any sense; because then people would try to make Go!Stop again anyway. So just Hae is the best. An experience to tuck away and perhaps a fairytale for his kids later? Haha.

Omo! I almost can't believe that you're telling me you want me to write some Kihae hahaha. I should printscreen this, print it out and hang it on my wall as proof. XDDD It might take some time, but I'm sure that during my exams I'll do plenty of writing and there will certainly be some in it for this verse.

It kind of sounds a little awkward, but if you want to read more of me & can take some character death, I would recommend you 'Of battles and unfound peace' That's one of my other prides. 'Reunion' is the third one I really love. Those two and this one are three stories written out of a spontaneous inspiration, so yeah~ Don't feel pressured though, haha. I feel kind of awkward promoting my own stories./stops here

CUDDLES FOR YOU BECAUSE YOU'RE AWESOME ;A; ♥

[drawingintheair]

I can't imagine how Hyukjae and his leopard print obsession could have in any way inspired this XD A bit of a, not a tongue twister but maybe a mental twist (or something lol) but I'm so glad I was able to inspire you to write anything at all. The fact that it was something as thought provoking as this adjaddk why are you so sweet?

That would be some fairytale to tell his kids! It really was the best way to end it especially since this could be the "end" but also leaves room to explore further in the verse.

LOL You and I are both surprised. I'm not a Kihae hater AT ALL I just got into suju when he was already inactive and my love for Eunhae tends to obliterate everything as you can surely tell. But I actually really like Kibum and if the fic is well written, I'm totally up for reading it.

/bookmarks both fics. Not awkward at all especially since I'm practically fawning over your writing. I look forward to reading more from you :)

CUDDLES BACK BECAUSE YOU ARE AWESOME AS WELL =D

[lyntia]

The width of my grin right now should be illegal because my cheeks are starting to hurt real badly. (And every time I reread that sentence I start to grin again lol~)

What I meant to say was the leopard fic was not one of those that inspired this, because I had to write this before I could read that fic. But the other three sure did. ;A; & to answer your question; many people ask me but idk. It's in my genes? lol

I'm glad you're as much a fan of my ending as I was. I'm also really glad I was actually able to end this in a rather satisfactory way. (Because usually I think that my endings are crappy or that this, that and anything could've been written in a better way, but here.. I'm satisfied.)

Look at me; writing yaoi pairings without writing yaoi. I always love to write the friendship fics, though. I'm very fond of the friendship between the members of these bands, especially between SJ members. *-* I'm kind of jealous of it hahaha~ But yeah, I know what you mean. I became a fan after he was gone as well, but then Kibum has this way to just take over your heart once you watch older shows & such. xD

Have to say you're the one who made me love Eunhae so much, though. In fact; Drowning (from my fic challenge) is another one of those fics inspired by yours. I think it was after that one you wrote in January even.. Drowning is yaoi. /bricked/ Yeah so, you're the one who initially corrupted me into yaoi. XD My daughters thought the world was ending, but it's the only really yaoi story I've ever written since, so I'm still safe~ xD

HAHAHAHA WHY DOES THIS FEEL LIKE A CONVENTION FOR YAOI WRITING PEOPLE WHO ARE IN DENIAL? /bricked more/ Don't think I'm blaming you or something hahaha. As you can see; you've been a great inspiration to me. That's why it's so amazing in my eyes that you fawn over my writing. ;A; ♥

[drawingintheair]

The Leopard Fic because pretty soon Hyukjae will turn into a leopard XD It must be in your genes then lol

It definitely left me satisfied which was rather impressive since it's an open ending as well. It makes me want more but I'd also be okay of there's was no more (though I'm really glad there will be =D)

I love friendship fics. There's just something so beautiful about the bond between these boys that makes me a fan of them more than their music at times I think. IA about Kibum. It's the smile. It just kind of melts my insides because he does it when I least expect it and catches me off guard and just gah. Kibum.

I could honestly go on for days over my love of Eunhae both as individuals and as a couple (romantic-wise or friendship-wise or as I like to call it: bromance) So the fact that I made you love them... I don't even know what to say/honored to be a certified Eunhae converter. LOL now I feel responsible for your corruption.

LOL FOREVER As long as one embraces the Eunhae bromance, one can be in denial all they want. I'm forever flattered I've been any form of inspiration to you and looking forward to the next thing you write ♥

[lyntia]

adjsjdghjkhjgh I'm kind of braindead right now hahaha. It's almost 1 am and I'm writing a QMi friendship fic to cheer up my friends who are avid QMi fans. xD

I'm like spazzing all over every time I read your comments so I will just sleep that spazz out of me so I can comment tomorrow with a slightly more sane mind. Then I will tell you all about how I adore those boys & Kibum's smile. Hahaha. Have a good night! ♥

[drawingintheair]

QMi friendship fic! Do want. And omg lol, go sleep XD

Looking forward to your comment spaz. Good night ^^ ♥