I'm no good at commenting, but I wanted to say I love this story. And I love your Santana. And this part was especially gut-wrenching. Just...amazing all around.
Wowsers. That was amazing, seriously. Putting the fight in flashbacks interspersed with the hate/sorrow!sex was brilliant and heartbreaking. I'm not usually big on angst (and I'm trusting the ending to this will be more upbeat :p) but this was just killer. Loved everything about it.
I'll be over here with my beer and cigarettes, waiting impatiently for the next bit.
Thanks! :D Yeah I went back and forth about whether I wanted to have it cut like that, with the flashbacks and the sex intertwined, because I didn't know if it was too much like, emotional whiplash or whatever but I think it turned out fine.
(Dude, don't worry. I need Santana and Brittany to be together to live, the angst will be worth I promise)
Ah, beer and cigarettes, my meal of choice while writing this. ;)
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I'll be over here with my beer and cigarettes, waiting impatiently for the next bit.
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(Dude, don't worry. I need Santana and Brittany to be together to live, the angst will be worth I promise)
Ah, beer and cigarettes, my meal of choice while writing this. ;)
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(Dude, don't worry. I need Santana and Brittany to be together to live, the angst will be worth I promise)
I love you.
Ah, beer and cigarettes, my meal of choice while writing this. ;)
See above.
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