Comments | lynne_monstr: [Fanfic] - Flicker and Fade (1/1)

lynne_monstr

[Fanfic] - Flicker and Fade (1/1)

Jun 25, 2013 13:13

Fandom: Hetalia
Contains: unknown consent (dubcon), asphyxiation, humiliation, voyeurism
Characters and Pairings: Prussia/Austria, England
Length: short
Summary: “Austria on his knees was one of Prussia’s favorite things.” Set during the Seven Years War.

This came about from the aph anon meme after a discussion of kinks and characters.

( “You’re doing it wrong. Harder.” The mocking tones of England’s voice rang out from across the room. )

pair:prussia/austria, hetalia, c:prussia, c:austria, c:england

Comments 6

kiramaru7 June 25 2013, 17:24:50 UTC

While I loved this, I feel like it needs a bit more... ^^; I want to know what naughtiness Prussia got up to with England or did they sit there, discussing the weather and what an idiot Austria is, while sipping some pilfered brandy from the prissy lil aristocrat's secret stash? ;p

lynne_monstr June 25 2013, 17:41:01 UTC

spoilers: they didn't discuss the weather :) Haha, I may or may not write a follow up!

Thanks, glad you liked! Also, I realized soon after posting that I forgot the asphyxiation label - sorry if it took you by surprise!

kiramaru7 June 25 2013, 17:56:22 UTC

*laughs* Awesomeness! ;p I hope you will! :D

You're welcome. No, while I personally would not like to put myself in Austria's position, having had 2 severe asthma attacks, I don't mind reading about it. ;p My squicks lie elsewhere.

n0t_again June 25 2013, 18:21:01 UTC

Austria on his knees is one of my favorite things, even better in blue-black strangulation :D

Me, I loved this - as I do all your work - but I really liked the "patsy" vibe I get from Prussia doing all the work here. Everyone else is having quite the time, and Prussia is at it like a second job. Sex is hard work, huh? Kinda feels like England's in control of this whole nasty, filthy, yummy business - which is interesting. I don't think I'd trust him any further than I could throw him and I'm almost afraid for Prussia's simple-mindedness in the face of England's conniving. Seems that someone could get very, very screwed in all of this - and not just Austria.

Of course this would be quite fine to continue, should you feel bent. It is great to see some progress on the writer's block! Whoohoo!

lynne_monstr June 25 2013, 18:56:58 UTC

Haha, who doesn’t love Austria on his knees!

And yes, England is a devious asshole. Good thing Prussia trusts him just about as much as you do. This may be a good excuse to finally dip my toe into some rough, destructive Prussia/England. I see them both as being much more violent in this time period than in modern day, so it would be fun to have them let loose a bit.

And thanks so much - I’m so glad you enjoyed my weekday snippet of porn! It feels good to have actually finished something! It helps that I’m back in familiar territory with this one :)

n0t_again June 26 2013, 02:48:01 UTC

I, for one, would absolutely love to see rough, destructive Prussia/England - I think they'd be so evenly matched it would be incredible. I do love that time period and for exactly the reasons you specify here ;)

No problem - I loved it! And familiar territories are often such a haven after an absence; home is the place where they have to take you in. :D