[TLB10] The Last Bridge

Jun 06, 2011 00:45

Title: The Last Bridge - Chapter 10
Word Count: 3697
Rating: PG
Pairing: Junhyung/Hyunseung
Summary: Two boys meet, each with their own problems. What path has life laid out for them?
Disclaimer: I do not own the characters.

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lunaticbelle June 5 2011, 22:45:27 UTC
Mean cliffhanger!!! :D I love "The Last Bridge", but I couldn't comment since I didn't have LJ before. Their relationship is so cute, I really hope they get together soon. D'aww they're just too sweet together <3 <3 I love bad boy Jun with a kind heart and shy, anti social, caring Hyunseung <3 I wonder how they'll solve Jun's "job", like if he's ever going to get out of this or if it's irrelevant. :D Anyways, I love how you write their moments together, it's really sweet.

Please update sooon~ because mean cliffhanger is mean!!

Belle. <3

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lykanion June 5 2011, 23:28:58 UTC
It's not a cliffhanger...I think xDD
Good to hear you made a LJ account yaay!!

And omggg another comment from you O_O I must be really luckyy~

And once again, it's not a cliffhangeeeer XDD

Thank youuu~!! <33

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lunaticbelle June 6 2011, 07:06:21 UTC
:D It's a cliffhanger for me!!! They're in bed, and Jun says "You like me" and Hyunni replies "yeah". TOTALLY A CLIFFHANGER :D because
"But it seemed Junhyung had already drifted off to sleep again." SEEMED!! :D Maybe he hasn't and is smiling like an idiot right now, or he'll turn around in the next second to kiss Hyunseung. Ahhh~ ^^

Belle. <3

Can I add you on LJ? ^^

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lykanion June 6 2011, 11:31:02 UTC
It's NOT A CLIFFHANGER XDDD
XDD
And omg at you people reading out so many different things from one sentence xDDD

XDD
I love your imagination <33

And of course you can xDD

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sephinaee June 6 2011, 00:25:08 UTC
The cliffhanger <3 Lol, I love how he just falls asleep again. Been stalking this story for a while now, but too chicken to comment, xD. Anyways, I really love how you write their relationship it's so sweet and real. Really lovely :) Update sooon (:

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lykanion June 6 2011, 11:32:05 UTC
It's not a cliffhangeeeer XDD

And omggg I'm so happy you finally commented!! Stalking is good and all but I still appreciate comments XDDD

And thank youuu~ I sure will !! <33

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veronica1975 June 6 2011, 02:14:55 UTC
ahhh my heart is beating like crazy with the last scene ahhhhh they are sooo perfect together and their bond is become more and more intime i really love this story

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lykanion June 6 2011, 11:32:48 UTC
Omg i love your comment <33
Thank you soo much!! ^__^

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vennarashii June 6 2011, 03:29:07 UTC
OMIGEH SPOOOOOOT! THANKYOU FOR THE FAST UPDATES! /glomps you
brb reading! :DDD

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vennarashii June 6 2011, 05:36:16 UTC
OMYGOOOOOOOOOOOD THE LAST SCEEEEEEEENE
I WAS SMILING LIKE CRAZYYYY LOL STILL SMILING NOW! /whacked

WHAT IS THIIIIS
I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY.
ITS OKAY TIE IT UP SOON
BUT WRITE MORE OKAY?
LOOOOOOVE <3

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lykanion June 6 2011, 11:34:09 UTC
Yeah I tried to update faster because the last chap sucked xDD
And omggg I'm so happy to know I could make someone smilee!!! O_O

SMILE PEOPLE, SMILE FOR ME *gone crazy* xDD

And I sure will try to write more XDD

Thank youuuu <333

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seoulkokoro June 6 2011, 03:46:15 UTC
OH GOD THIS HAS MADE MY DAY.
LIKE SERIOUSLY.
IT'S AMAZING. *-*

You continue to amaze me. You're able to think up such good ideas and AGAIN WITH THE WRITING STYLE! It's so professional and pretty and it just describes everything flawlessly~ I just love reading it <33 ^___^

AHHH! THERE WERE SO MANY GOOD SCENES IN THIS CHAPTER! (And btw, I don't mind you making the chapters "a little longer." it just makes me happier. ^^) Hyunseung realizes his feelings!! kyaa, it makes me feel oh-so fluffy~ <33 >///<

And Junhyung! I wish he'd stop getting hurt. Poor boy. At least Seungie is there to care for him, kekekeke~ <3

I love "tlb!" I'm going to be really sad when it ends. TT__TT I'll enjoy it while I can! This is definitely one of my favorite series. OF ALL TIME! :DD

GJ! <3 Keep it up, dear! ^__^

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lykanion June 6 2011, 11:38:11 UTC
OMG I COULD MAKE SOMEONE'S DAY BETTER OMGGGG O_O I just love comments like theeese *__*

OMGOMGOMG YOU GET ME SPAZZING OMGOMG. Good ideas *__* THANK YOUUU!! Writing style *__* THANK YOUUU!!
OMGOMGOMG I can't stop O_O_OO_O_O_O_OO_O <- multi-eyed creature xDD

And yeah I trieeed as the last chap was so shooort :X I don't like longer chaps though, it's hard to read it over, I get lazy :X BUT OMG I'll try to make them longer noooow!! And all scenes are for you peoplee~!! Oeh, how happy I get from comments *__*

OMGOMGOMOGMOGOMG
'This is definitely one of my favorite series. OF ALL TIME! :DD' I'm officially in love with you if you allow me to be O_O_O_O_O_O OMG THIS COMMENT OMGG O_O_O_O_O

THANK YOU SOO MUCH <3333

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