[TLB7] The Last Bridge

May 23, 2011 22:23

Title: The Last Bridge - Chapter 7
Word Count: 4055
Rating: PG
Pairing: Junhyung/Hyunseung
Summary: Two boys meet, each with their own problems. What path has life laid out for them?
Disclaimer: I do not own the characters.

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(tlb) the last bridge series, junseung

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kurara_shikaze May 23 2011, 21:43:18 UTC
*_____* chapter 7 is here!! I win the bet

Let me say that since I'm mostly Junseung deprived these days, I'm tremendously excited this is up. My heart is still going dugun dugun after reading >3<

Ill Hyunseung is funny because he falls to the floor xD
I just love how Junhyung takes care of him. The whole carry to the room struggle (butt slap included) is sweet and crackful.

Awww Hyungie feels lonely after waking~! And why does Junhyung's handwriting have to be bad?? xDD
Junnie climbing on the bed and talking about kissing...ICWYDT. But! Not enough space between lips was covered ç.ç the following knighty rescue calmed my desires for physical action...a bit :D

Hahaha the magic of clothing!! Hyunseung has finally become the popular being-stalked guy he should have been all along...not that his sudden change makes me love him more than what I already did, but Junhyung sure enjoys the sight! *wiggles eyebrows*
Oh Hyungie's spacing out moments...xD

Wae no more actionnn? nggg xDDD sorry, me perv.

I love you and this story so muuuuch < ( ... )

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lykanion May 24 2011, 03:14:22 UTC
LMAO yeah I guess you win yea ^^ But only because you're here always writing loooong comments that keep me motivated xD

Lolol his handwriting at start was 'not bad nor good' but I for some reason changed it...hmmm... xDD I probably put it like that because my own handwriting is awful so I was like 'Hey...Boys can't have better handwriting than mine...'
And muhahahahahaha~

Well, I actually wanted to bring out another aspect considering his clothing but I guess I failed a bit xDD I'll make the next chapter better XDD I totally suck at trying to write between the lines xD

You poor people waiting for action. I'm here all like...Well, I have no idea how I am xDD Just thinking if I should troll or not ^^

Thank you so muuch <3 ( ... )

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kurara_shikaze May 24 2011, 16:37:20 UTC
Yayyyy. I feel like a cheerleader!
But it's NOT thanks to me...you must have loved this story more than the others to have achieved a chapter so high (in your scale. You told me you never had reached a 7 part >3<)

Hahhahah you don't want your characters to be better than ya xDD

You are talking with a very unsubtle person here! I can't decipher a simple code even if my life depends to it...so reading between lines is out of question ^^;;; It's not your fault I couldn't get further than the clothing aspect u_u;;

TROLL. (I dunno if I'm demanding or calling you o_o)
Wow. You sure check your works a lot *worships*

*throws an orange at Lykanion*
You get Seung now. Bwahahaha. Junnie's already nagging about the mess, two more minutes and there'll be no shirt xD (I'm so crazy)

LOVE YA!!!
Work! *whips*

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lykanion May 24 2011, 18:02:10 UTC
OMG how much your comment made me laugh xDDDDD How can you be so epic xDDD

And yeah, I kinda like this story somehow or somewhy (I don't get why this word doesn't exist... :X) But I guess that's the power of Junseung, can't seem to get enough xDD

Oh ok, though it's my fault too to some extent xDDD

OMG LMAOOOO XD TROLL, THANKS A LOT LMAO XDDDD I'll see what I can do xDDD It seems trolling is the next best thing next to sarcasm XD And lol, is the times I check a lot? I always think it's never enough xDD AND OH YEAAA, ALL HAIL LYKANION LMAO.
I'm sometimes impossible *ashamed of herself*

*catches the orange* OMG OH YEAAH~ *does the dance with an evil smile which hopefully isn't creepy* Now all we need is a bucket of water which would make things even better LMAOOO xD

LOLOL XDDDD
Love ya too <33
*runs away from the whip* EVIL!!!! XD

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seoulkokoro May 24 2011, 02:24:59 UTC
AHhhhh, I love this fic so much! It's like, so freaking amazing!! *_*
I love the little moments they have...it makes me wonder what'll happen next. I sit hear jumping in my seat because they're just so cute together. xD

Can't wait for the next uppppdaatee!~ I'm patiently awaiting it! <333 Great job, dear!~

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lykanion May 24 2011, 03:02:30 UTC
I try..I try... xDDDD

Thank you so much for the comment <3

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ext_503939 May 24 2011, 05:43:39 UTC
I'm thinking maybe you're a little fed up with my praises on your story(since I always put them on every comment I leave, and they're all probably the same words.. I do mean all of them though) so I'm just gonna tell you that I'll again (and always will) be waiting for your update. :333

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lykanion May 24 2011, 15:48:35 UTC
Omo thank you soo much xD I love praises *_*
Every comment is really appreciated as I get some feedback and it motivates me A LOT!!!

Thank youuu <3

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lunarebina May 24 2011, 06:08:42 UTC
Hey, i started reading this just ytd and i love it! =D im trying to find d connection btwn d fic title and d story though xD keep writing!

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lykanion May 24 2011, 15:49:44 UTC
Yeah, the title is quite random as I have drifted away from my original plan xDDD
But I think the meaning will come out in one way or another XDD

Thank you sooo much for the comment <333

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vennarashii May 24 2011, 08:24:57 UTC
SPOTTTTTTTT OMG SPOT! love you okay reading now <3

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vennarashii May 24 2011, 08:51:12 UTC
OMG aaaccckkk i'm really growing to love this story ;_; it's amazing no really. aaaack

BUTTSLAP! AHAHA XD

so seungie's affections have grew neeeh... finally. lol. he's accepting it. seungie not on denial! and junhyung was practically asking for a kiss, lol that was so cute :D and when junhyung burst in the door and said 'I'm baaaack!' THAT WAS JUST TOO ADORBS. ♥

And around the end, about seungie's transformation... that was really, really.. uhh? how should I put this? really, well put. lol. it was just the right time for things like that to start to happen. GOSHH this story is on a good going. ack. incoherent comment is incoherent; i love this story sooo much :D

did I add you? adding you now. okay. love you <3 love the story aaaaahh more updates please! :D

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lykanion May 24 2011, 15:52:48 UTC
Omo, I actually wanted to show the transformation of the state of mind but I guess everything starts somewhere xDD

And OMG thank you sooo much <33
This comment definitely made me smile so much xDD I'm now happy YAY *party-time*

*adds back*
YAY!

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