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callmejude in lyingink

Just You

Jan 26, 2011 02:20

Title: Just You
Pairing: Eduardo/Mark
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Written for this prompt in the kink meme: "Eduardo sometimes lets sappy things, like terms of endearments, slip out when he's talking to Mark. Sometimes he doesn't even notice he does it but sometimes he does and blushes in embarrassment. But Mark never brings it up because he secretly ( Read more... )

angst, slash, eduardo/mark, social network, fluff

Comments 49

chibigirl626 January 27 2011, 05:09:57 UTC

the very end, oh my god. so heartbreaking. ;___;

callmejude January 27 2011, 05:28:28 UTC

I know, I'm sorry! I wasn't expecting to end it that way, but it just kinda...happened. I shouldn't write fic while drinking, because everything ends sadly, when I do. :c

kal_ella January 27 2011, 06:17:41 UTC

that ending ;_____________; so good, so gut wrenching, #guhhhhhhhh <3

callmejude January 27 2011, 06:49:59 UTC

I hope that's a good "guh" XD Sorry it's so heartbreaking - every time I so rarely am capable of writing fluff without a sad ending, I don't even know.

taxiwell January 27 2011, 14:24:44 UTC

You are amazing!You said you wrote this while you were drunk!!!
Maybe you should get drunk more often :DDDDD
I don't think this is a sad ending...they still care about each other...so it is sort of happy ending :-P

callmejude January 28 2011, 00:42:26 UTC

I think I should! I get more praise on the stories I write while drunk. XDD

I'm contemplating a sequel, actually, but I dunno. I think I'll just hand over the rights to someone else if they want to write it, but the whole point of ending it that way was to leave it kind of ~open ended. ...Or something. I don't know, I was drunk. XDD

ckru January 27 2011, 15:12:37 UTC

The ending. Oh, god. It totally killed my mood and my fangirl mode. ;____; So, so heartbreaking and painful. I've always known that I want them never end up that way, but this ending of yours, well, like it takes my wishful thinking to a whole new level.

I want to squish both of them so bad and lock them in a room so they can finally make up and be happy ever after, like before. Poor Eduardo and his complex, but his nicknames for Mark are super-duper cute. XDD

Still heartbreaking for them, though.

callmejude January 28 2011, 00:43:34 UTC

I KNOW, I'M SORRY. ;_; I wasn't planning on ending it that way, honest! I hope you still liked it despite it's mood-killing ending. :c

That actually sounds like a good fic idea. XD You should write it.

hadmyheart January 27 2011, 16:49:17 UTC

ugh you made my heart soar then shattered it. brilliant.

callmejude January 28 2011, 00:38:16 UTC

8D That means a lot, coming from you! Hope that doesn't come off as creepy, but I adore your fics, so. Thank you so much. :3

hadmyheart January 28 2011, 11:48:05 UTC

Awww, really? Thank you so much!