OH MY GOD THIS IS SO GREAT. I can't really pull together a coherent comment because I loved this so, so, so, so much and it was so long and so wonderful and so in character. Um, okay. This is basically just going to be a list of everything I loved about it:
Niall tries to toe his shoes on while holding a slice of pizza in each hand The little details like that (Niall eating all the time, NOT LIKING FETA, LOOKING TO LOUIS TO CONFIRM THAT, Louis having to hide from Niall after he eats, Niall ordering chips because Harry will eat them, etc.) are so perfect. Like, it was just a wonderful way to get a full idea of them individually without it being so overt.
he has to jump out of the way as Louis tries to whip Harry in the back of the legs with his braces.AND THIS AS WELL. I am dying because this is literally so flawless. It's just. These little moments that you put in there are killing me
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OH MY GOD! YOU ARE AMAZING! THIS IS THE BEST SHIT I HAVE READ IN A LONG AWHILE AND I TOTALLY LOVE YOU RIGHT NOW! lol, I apologize for my incoherent fangirling, but this story is absolutely worth it. You just made my day :)
this was perfect. i just love how authentic and realistic this was, because some people usually do the over dramatic route and this was just. so nice. refreshing, almost, to have it be like an everyday thing when it's so obviously not. i loved your characterizations and how spot on they seemed, on they just worked and how it would that zayn would take over being "daddy direction" when liam can't. and that kiss, oh, such a small moment compressed so much into it and how liam reacted and that zayn actually went to him and how he kept telling himself that liam would come back, but he wasn't sure and when he did. god, that was my favorite part, how he just said welcome back, you've been missed and it just BOYS. god, this is so all over the place, but i loved it so much. thank you for sharing this beauty with us. ♥
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thanks for reading :))))
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Niall tries to toe his shoes on while holding a slice of pizza in each hand
The little details like that (Niall eating all the time, NOT LIKING FETA, LOOKING TO LOUIS TO CONFIRM THAT, Louis having to hide from Niall after he eats, Niall ordering chips because Harry will eat them, etc.) are so perfect. Like, it was just a wonderful way to get a full idea of them individually without it being so overt.
he has to jump out of the way as Louis tries to whip Harry in the back of the legs with his braces.AND THIS AS WELL. I am dying because this is literally so flawless. It's just. These little moments that you put in there are killing me ( ... )
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idek what to say but i'm so so so glad that you enjoyed this, and thank you a trillion zillion for the amazing comment :)
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so glad you enjoyed this fic! thank you so much for even reading it, and for commenting, too! i appreciate that!!
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