the visible beauty of a voice that sings

[luxover]

Title: The Visible Beauty of a Voice That Sings
Pairing: Liam/Zayn
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 5,264
A/N: Written loosely for this prompt at the kink meme. Liam has synesthesia which allows him to perceive music as color.
Summary: "You have the most beautiful voice I've ever seen," Liam says, whispering because it's a secret, because it's truer than

Comments

[smallaffair]

omg this is wonderful *__*
i didn't want to get into 1D fic bc i think most of it is probably awful
but it's you so
:3333333333

[luxover]

hahahaha i tried to hold off of 1d in general, but when i slipped, i figured i might as well just make the most of it and fic while i'm at it.

glad you liked it, boo :)

[darkensunrise]

Aw. This was really beautiful.

[luxover]

thank youuuuu :)

also tho, your icon is like, one of my all time favorite 1d music video moments alkdjfa;lskdjfa;lsdkfj

[erstwhiled]

This was gorgeous.
You're characterizations were wonderful. And the way Liam and Zayn just sort of came together so smoothly and foreheads touching. I love foreheads touching, so I'm sort of a little bit in love automatically.
I saw this prompted and I was waiting for a fill, you have done it complete justice.

[luxover]

thank goodness i didn't totally fail the prompt, haha. it's a hard one to do, when you don't actually have synesthesia!! but hey-- thank you so much for reading and commenting. i really appreciate it. :)

[luxover]

WELL WELL WELL

TRY AS THEY MIGHT,

I KNEW THE FANDOMS COULDN'T KEEP US APART FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!

[intherubble]

my favorite part of this is definitely the dialogue which I thought sounded really natural and them which is hard to nail. and the way everything in this feels soft and gentle and intimate. and ughughugh zayn singing torn for him without questioning it, so perfect.

and just everything about this line "You're so out of it," he says, and Liam wishes, wishes that he could see laughter, too. kiiiiiills me.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep writing these boys.

[luxover]

i'm so glad you like the fic, really! omg you don't even know, like really. the plan is to keep writing, so you'll get more fic yet!!

thanks for the comment, boo. i really appreciate it :)