the edge of everything: part 2

[luxover]

Comments

[sheep_emilia]

Absolutely amazing! I always love your writing, but the portrayal of characters here... just too good.
(And I've been CRAVING some Villa/Messi... so it's just perfect).

[luxover]

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! And I hear you-- I'm CRAVING it, too! I don't get why there's not more of it out there...

(Love your icon!!)

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[go_for_it_kid]

Wow, wow, wow, I really have no words... Like at all... This was... Soooo unexpected but at the same time so right. And just so fucking truth... And wow... Amazing... You vocalized it so well, it was so human and viceral at some points, and the way you depicted Leo was so... Beautiful, and honest, and naive... Just the way he is... Wow.
Fantastic!!!
<3

[greenpixiehair]

I love everything. Just, everything. Doesn't hurt that I'm in love with Messi entirely, especially when he's hard on himself. So yeah, Leo being so simple in such a... a compplicated way, and his relationship with Pep was so precious, and Villa being charming and insistent and fantastic - I loved it.

Possibly the most inarticulate comment ever, but that's what your story did to me :P

[luxover]

Oh my gosh, I love inarticulate comments, especially this one because it made my heart all warm. Thank you for reading and commenting!

[nahco3]

oh my god, this is absolutely fantastic. your characterization is outstanding, just amazing. I absolutely love the way you write Messi; I think you've managed to make him very relate-able and human? mortal? but at the same time, you've manged to convey his unique incredibleness. and I just adore your David too, so so much.

I absolutely loved this! thank you so much for sharing it.

[luxover]

Oh man, I don't even know what to say. So THANK YOU! I don't think I've read any Messi fics (besides your one with Cristiano, which I still love, haha), so I was kind of going in blind and am very pleased that it came out alright.

Thank you for reading and taking the time to drop me a comment!

[luxover]

this comment just made me smile a smile that split my face in half.

thank YOU.