i love this! i can't believe i even read this, actually, cause cris is the protagonist hahah. but this is really really good. i like your writing style a lot.
but Kaká seems to be pretty confident about it and that’s good enough for Cristiano. awwww bb boy! he's only going out with her because kaka approves. just too cute.
She’s smaller than he always seems to remember cause he wants a man! all these subtle hints, everything leads back to ricky. haha i love it. really pretty. :)
the tone of this is... idk. i can't explain it except for it being beautiful. each 'section' fits perfect with the others. you throw in little snippets of details that made me go 'oh yeah i can totally see cris doing that'. realism. loved it a lot.
F;ALKJSDFASHFIUAIJOSFLKAHSDF;KAJLFHBFU;AJKSFJASKLJFA Okay. Now that I've read this three times I've got to figure out what to say that's coherent and good. and stuff. And like lol. I keep going back in to find quotes and then I'm like copying/pasting the whole thing back int he comment box haha. I want to fucking flail over everything. It's like..really really hard. Like. you don't know.
Okay, I WILL PERSEVERE, FOR YOU.
MY THOUGHTS: 1) OH MY HECK, FOOTIE FIC FROM YOU FLAIL SPAZZ FLAIL FLAIL (In last night's dream I dreamt that you posted the other one and I got to read it and I was like "omg this is amazing." but idk what I thought was in it, I was just flaily over it haha. 2) Since it seems most other people are saying it: I'm not even that huge of a Cris fan and I read it. (somewhat due to you, somewhat due to the cris/kaka bit that is like so utterly heartbreaking it hurts, but I'm not talking about that rn.) 3) and when he pulls off, Cristiano notices a trail of spit and come leading from the tip of Cristiano’s cock to
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but Kaká seems to be pretty confident about it and that’s good enough for Cristiano.
awwww bb boy! he's only going out with her because kaka approves. just too cute.
She’s smaller than he always seems to remember
cause he wants a man! all these subtle hints, everything leads back to ricky. haha i love it. really pretty. :)
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short but perfect comment. :)))
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But this. This is absolutely beautiful. It flows so effortlessly and its cohesiveness is perfect. The way you write is just gorgeous and I loved it <3
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Okay, I WILL PERSEVERE, FOR YOU.
MY THOUGHTS:
1) OH MY HECK, FOOTIE FIC FROM YOU FLAIL SPAZZ FLAIL FLAIL (In last night's dream I dreamt that you posted the other one and I got to read it and I was like "omg this is amazing." but idk what I thought was in it, I was just flaily over it haha.
2) Since it seems most other people are saying it: I'm not even that huge of a Cris fan and I read it. (somewhat due to you, somewhat due to the cris/kaka bit that is like so utterly heartbreaking it hurts, but I'm not talking about that rn.)
3) and when he pulls off, Cristiano notices a trail of spit and come leading from the tip of Cristiano’s cock to ( ... )
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loce and pineapples,
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