BPS Secret Santa: "The Christmas Stranger" (4/5) for GeekMama

Jan 24, 2010 05:04

Title: "The Christmas Stranger" (4/5)
Author:   
Written for:  
Characters/Pairing:  Young Will Turner/Young Elizabeth Swann
Rating: PG
Warnings: Some doxy suggestiveness in Part 2; minor violence in Parts 2 and 3; salty language in Part 4.
Disclaimer:  PotC is Disney's, not mine (darn it!)
Author's Notes:  In response to GeekMama's request "J/E (etc. ?) ( Read more... )

willabeth, elizabeth swann, fanfic, secret santa, will turner

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luvvycat January 27 2010, 02:55:52 UTC
This certainly conveys a fine sense of (disreputable) place. And of Jack, during what must've been one of the worst nadirs of his life.

Yes ... poor Jack, parted from his precious Pearl for three long years, likely suffering the lowest point of his life since Beckett and the branding. And resorting to living in a flophouse so squalid that even the vermin refuse to stay there! (That's GOT to be bad!) :-(

But you know our Jack ... give him some time for his bumps and bruises to heal, some clean duds, a bit of shine in his mouth to plug that gap, a new hair-do--and a good dose of hope--and he'll be good as new, ready to conquer the world, and get the Pearl back! After all, he IS Captain Jack Sparrow! He just needs to be reminded of that! ;-)

Ah, such a generous gesture on Elizabeth's part- perhaps it made all the difference!

Yes, one can never underestimate the impact of an act of kindness, particularly when you're feeling at the end of your rope.

Kudos on a fine fic. :)

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! :-)

-- Cat

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