BPS Secret Santa - "The Christmas Stranger" (1/?) for GeekMama

[luvvycat]

Title: "The Christmas Stranger" (1/?)
Author:   
Written for:  
Characters/Pairing:  Young Will Turner/Young Elizabeth Swann
Rating: PG
Warnings: Some doxy suggestiveness and minor violence in Parts 2 (and possibly 3).
Disclaimer:  PotC is Disney's, not mine (darn it!)
Author's Notes:  In response to GeekMama's request "J/E (etc. ?) at Christmas; or young

Comments

Re: Thank you!!!!

[luvvycat]

What a wonderful gift!

I'm so glad you like it, so far! :-)

Just perfect, and the rest is too, really, you've given such a heartwarming picture of the two of them, inhabiting such different worlds, but connected in so many ways.

Poor Will! Having to face the rigours of puberty, without a father to counsel him on the process! Never having been an adolescent male myself, I hope I've described his "inner changes" as well as his outer ones accurately! ;-)

There's such rich history there between Will and Elizabeth to tap into, bonds forged by the things they had in common, and a sweet devotion to one another in spite of the differences in social status. I can see her being wilful and impulsive as a child (as she is in her adult life!), and Will, out of concern for her, trying to temper that flightiness with a cooler head and a dose of common sense.

I am very much looking forward to the next part!!

I'll be posting part 2 (and possibly part 3?) sometime today. Unfortunately, after two days of cooking, baking, and entertaining family for Christmas, I spent most of yesterday (I kid you not!) sleeping and "recharging my batteries", so didn't get to do much more than post a few Comments responses during my more wakeful moments! ;-)

Tickled that you're liking it so far! More to come later today ...

Hope you're having a simply smashing holidays!

-- Cat