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luvntrek

Cousin Charlie (Part 9)

Mar 27, 2010 17:24

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new_hillbilly March 28 2010, 21:08:00 UTC

Hehehe... oh, Spock. You are such a silly prude! Love the part where she pretends to brush a speck off her uniform.

But regarding Hailey... wow. Wow! This plot is getting thicker! Don't know what to think... if she wasn't lying about her age, I'd assume she was innocent. I wonder, though, if there is a perfectly reasonable explanation?

luvntrek March 28 2010, 22:09:04 UTC

Hee Hee! Poor Spock! What if someone saw them indeed!

As for Hailey, poor girl does believe that she is only 23. More to come soon!

threeb_1973 March 28 2010, 21:57:59 UTC

Whoa nelly! I can't wait to read the next update.

luvntrek March 28 2010, 22:10:11 UTC

Thanks! So much is going on. I will update as soon as I can!

kayekaye1 March 28 2010, 22:33:47 UTC

LOL!!! He's not going to be able to fully concentrate on anything else but that kiss! What a twist! Could Hailey indeed be a spy? I guess we'll find out soon! This is such a great story.

luvntrek March 28 2010, 23:44:23 UTC

I think that he wanted that kiss to go on, except not in the hallway. Hee hee! More to come soon.

uhurafan March 28 2010, 23:34:56 UTC

He he he! Take that Mr. Spock!!! Nyota has definitely given him something to think about!!!

Interesting storyline with Hailey and her mother. I can't wait to see what develops.

luvntrek March 28 2010, 23:45:01 UTC

Hailey's mom is a piece of work! More to come soon.

yalegirl03 March 29 2010, 01:28:48 UTC

I love it! Nyota is too cute. I love your picture of shocked/indignant Spock and innocent Nyota. I wonder if Hailey is who she claims to be. She better not hurt Pasha!

luvntrek March 29 2010, 10:36:54 UTC

Hee Hee! The girl had to take matters into her own hands! Spock knows he likes that kiss. Love your icon!