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Cousin Charlie (Part 8)

Mar 22, 2010 13:02

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spockchick March 24 2010, 13:35:45 UTC

Hmmm.... I am intrigued to know what burr has got under Kirk's saddle about Hailey? I have a notion but won't voice it. Very intriguing! Love the grape song, although peach-fuzz on the pillow may be a bit icky-sticky :-)

luvntrek March 24 2010, 23:51:08 UTC

No, I wouldn't like peach fuzz on my pillow either. Thanks for the comment. More to come soon.

guitarlovechild March 24 2010, 16:55:15 UTC

Spock and Kirk need to calm down or someone is going to be extremely pissed off.

luvntrek March 24 2010, 23:52:23 UTC

Thanks for the comment. More to come soon!

uhurafan March 24 2010, 23:50:53 UTC

"..Perhaps our little concert will help him realize that he should move a little faster. He might not like all the added attention it may bring to you." I wonder what Charlie has up his sleeve as far as Nyota is concerned for the concert. He sounds like he has a plan! :o)

PS love the song.

luvntrek March 24 2010, 23:53:15 UTC

I'm not sure yet what Charlie is up to...but more to come soon.

kayekaye1 March 25 2010, 01:54:52 UTC

Nice song. It really has that 60's feel to it. I can't wait to see Spock's reaction to the attention Nyota receives. Hee Hee!

luvntrek March 25 2010, 10:25:14 UTC

Whatever Charlie's up to I am sure that it will not be logical!

riiya March 25 2010, 22:25:54 UTC

interesting...i think there is something more to Hailey's past, if Kirk really want to know her age, surely he can get that easily from the passenger's list, its only her age not her medical record, even a public airplane now require a proper ID to get in so why not an important military vessel like Enterprise. I would imagine they must have gone through some kind of background check before they able to let loose roaming in one of the Federation prized starship.