Be my Prince Charming? Chapter 2: Raw Horse flavoured Ice cream?

Apr 30, 2009 15:32

Hey! I'm back with a new chapter of "Be my Prince Charming" I've gotten help from cookierulez as my editor :D
WARNING!: The starred words will be explained at the end of the story! ;)
I hope you all enjoy! Start story!
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cookierulez May 2 2009, 06:56:38 UTC
.... AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA no.

XD; oh mys. wendy-senpai would disapprove of this. for it is filled with her only nightmare: FANGIRLING.

i, on the other hand, happen to enjoy fangirling xD;

kk edit tiem~

it's so shiney => shiny. because shinEy is a name =)

I'm rushing out of here, before the teacher can say anything => between "here" and "before", take away the comma.

" The're for the customers..." Sally replied. => spelt they're

"WHAT COSTOMERS!?" => already corrected this one on msn, but i'll do it again: cUstomers

Sally.... Is that scene I see real? => comma between "see" and "real"

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