There's a Hell of a Universe Next Door (Chapter Three)

[lustmordred]

Title: There's a Hell of a Universe Next Door
Fandom: Supernatural
Pairing: Sam/Dean, Sam/Dean (this will totally make sense if you read it)
Warnings: AU (sort of), dub-con (sort of), suicide (sort of), mental illness, violence
Rated: R-NC17
Word count: 28,000// this part: 8,016
Summary: There's a big difference between dying and never being born

Comments

[lustmordred]

I haven't heard of him, but that seems to be a very similar idea, yes. Dean feels like he would be killing his parents, but Castiel tells him that he's not. They're already dead. It's a paradox, too, I guess.

Yes! I really wanted to have that uncertain feeling come through in this. The fact that Dean is mentally ill should make him and the reader wonder at least a little if it isn't all just in his head. There is more on this later on, too.

I hadn't actually noticed that about the characters, but that's interesting. You learn all kinds of things about your own writing from the people who read it. I don't think I consciously intended to make the other characters all seem less real and fleshed out, but that is interesting that you see it that way. More interesting, I think, because it's told from the less real Dean's POV.

I have not read that, but it sounds like it might be a good book. I'll look it up sometime.

Don't worry about going on, I do that myself on the rare occasions when I find something on LJ that really gets to me. I actually find it very flattering that something of mine has done this for someone else. I hope you don't mind, but I'm going to friend your journal. You've been very interesting and nice to talk to.

[rince1wind]

Please do!