Zac is so messed up, though I always thought he had a weird shred of humanity in the show that you managed to replicate. When he sounded genuinely apologetic for shooting Noah and saying "It's nothing personal, Monster," you managed to echo that in how he doesn't plan on renaming Rose. It's a nice thing to keep running, an awkward not-quite-morality.
YES - that's exactly what I was trying to do here. Crazy, twisted Zac who wants Rose because she's Zoe's and isn't going to rename her. I'm glad it worked, lol. :)
Yes!!! I was hoping there would be some kicking ass and taking names by Reid! Excited!!!!
No, seriously, it was really good. I liked the back and forth thing!
Okay, so I might need your help this weekend. In between working on my next couple of chapters, I'm also going to start the early planning of hospital sex because I want to make sure I have it done when I need it and the story's starting to move along now, so yeah.....
Heee. A little bit. Luke will own the face off with Zac. He's due. Reid will get a face off with someone though, in about two chapters. :)
Good - I thought it might be too confusing, but damn if this chapter didn't flow like nobody's business. I had no trouble writing it at all.
OOOOOH! Another porn weekend? I'm so down for that, lol. I need to finish up my one shot this weekend, and work on my Reid tribute Vid too. I also plan to try and include alcohol if I can swing it. Maybe I'll be the tipsy one this time (probably not, because it's too expensive, but I can dream!).
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Get Rosie Back! & Safe!! PLEASE!! I Don't like her being gone! And With Zac at that!
Poor Reid D:
Poor Luke D:
Poor Rose D: She's gotta be missing Daddy like crazy already
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She'll be gone just a little bit longer - chapter wise. Time wise things will happen pretty fast - a lot of stuff crammed into a few days.
They'll be happy at the end!
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Zac is so messed up, though I always thought he had a weird shred of humanity in the show that you managed to replicate. When he sounded genuinely apologetic for shooting Noah and saying "It's nothing personal, Monster," you managed to echo that in how he doesn't plan on renaming Rose. It's a nice thing to keep running, an awkward not-quite-morality.
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YES - that's exactly what I was trying to do here. Crazy, twisted Zac who wants Rose because she's Zoe's and isn't going to rename her. I'm glad it worked, lol. :)
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I Lol'd when Reid laughed at Margo's comment about having her 'best people on it'.
Reid holding Luke's hand! <3
Lily insisting! <3
Noah wishing it were him! *evil laugh* <3
Okay, now I seriously want Reid to kick some ass and help get Rosie back! Is that a possibility!?
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LOL - that was part of the tweaking right before it went up.
Hee, I was trying to duplicate the hospital scene after Luke's hit and run.
Ummm, Reid will definitely be involved in getting Rose back :)
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No, seriously, it was really good. I liked the back and forth thing!
Okay, so I might need your help this weekend. In between working on my next couple of chapters, I'm also going to start the early planning of hospital sex because I want to make sure I have it done when I need it and the story's starting to move along now, so yeah.....
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Good - I thought it might be too confusing, but damn if this chapter didn't flow like nobody's business. I had no trouble writing it at all.
OOOOOH! Another porn weekend? I'm so down for that, lol. I need to finish up my one shot this weekend, and work on my Reid tribute Vid too. I also plan to try and include alcohol if I can swing it. Maybe I'll be the tipsy one this time (probably not, because it's too expensive, but I can dream!).
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