come here, boy / five seven five

[sixtieshairdo]

Nine haikus & then some.

Comments

[inflowers]

Um so is it weird that I found these kind of hot? Like, totally sweet and beautiful and everything but also kind of hot?

Whoo. Shivers.
Magnificent!

[sixtieshairdo]

I HAD NO DIRECT INTENTION TO MAKE THIS HOT AT ALL, BUT NOW THAT YOU MENTIONED IT...

YOUR COMMENT MADE ME SMILE REALLY, REALLY WIDE, BB.

*HUGGLES YOU BREATHLESS*

[sexyscholar]

NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGH.

[sixtieshairdo]

♥

ONLY YOU CAN TURN ME ON WITH ONE INCOHERENT SYLLABLE, LOVE.

[sexyscholar]

♥

I WONDER WHAT WOULD HAPPENED IF I LET YOU IN ON SOME OF THE THINGS I'D LIKE TO SAY.

BUT LET ME SWOON OVER THIS FIRST:

come here.

boy.

THIS? OH FUCK. IT'S SO NEEDY AND RAW AND SEXY AND IT MAKES ME CLENCH MY THIGHS TOGETHER AND GRIND AGAINST THE SEAT. NO LIE.

YOUR WRITING UNDOES ME, BABY.

[sixtieshairdo]

SEE, I MEANT IT ALL TO BE...MELANCHOLIC AND CONTEMPLATIVE.

BUT I MUST BE A REAL HORNY BITCH BENEATH IT ALL.

WELL, YOU SHOULD KNOW BETTER THAN ANYONE, LOVE.

AND I AM SURE YOU ARE WELL-AWARE OF THE EPIC EFFECT YOU HAVE ON ME, BABY.

[gwennylou]

Not hot? Definitely hot. This just makes me exceedingly happy. I want to make you miniature sized and put you in my pocket and take you to my classroom and you can show my 7th and 8th graders that writing haikus is not torturous but amazing, although I don't think I could get away with those kind of haikus. But still you are a brilliant writer and a great example of how writing can be awesome and not evil.

[sixtieshairdo]

YOUR COMMENTS ALWAYS MAKE ME FEEL ON TOP OF THE WORLD.

*SHRINKS MYSELF TO MINIATURE SIZE JUST FOR YOU*

I HOPE YOUR STUDENTS DON'T BITE :D

AND YOU'RE LOVELY.

THANKS, BB.

♥

[esqueish]

OH YES. DEFINITELY HOT. GUH. I KNOW THIS WAS INSPIRED BY A WONDERFUL SONG, BUT I CAN TOTALLY SEE THIS AS A SONG TOO. SOMETHING WITH A SLOW GRINDING BEAT. AND VIOLINS. LOL WUT AM I TALKING ABOUT, I GUESS YOU'VE MADE ME ALL INCOHERENT ♥

[sixtieshairdo]

OH WOW. A SONG?

NORA, YOU ALWAYS FLATTER ME BEYOND THE MOON.

AND I LOVE BEING FLATTERED!

*BATS EYELASHES*

THANKS, LOVE.

*HUGGLES YOU FOREVER*

[asecretkept]

This...this is beautiful and breath-taking and wowwww, so powerful.

[sixtieshairdo]

THANK YOU, BB!

*SKIPS HAPPILY WITH A YELLOW UMBRELLA*

:D