Brain vs Heart

[lure007]

Title: Brain vs Heart
Author: lure007
Rating: NC-17
Summary: It’s punch!day at the Lilypad. What happens when Luke doesn't step away?
Disclaimer: No one but Luke and Reid own each other.
A/N: Fix-it. Deviates from canon around the 6.27 mark in the video below. Unbeta'd. Feedback and sandwiches are one and the same. :D

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Comments

[hilja83]

Really HOT!!!! You could feel the heat between Luke and Reid in this scene. Liked it a lot.

[lure007]

Thank you! :)

[hackysack01]

How hot and sexy was this?! Even though i didnt want the fic to end, i actually love that you've left it so that Reid hasn't gotten off - it intensifies the sexual tension and desire between the two of them; waiting will make the actual act a whole lot more explosive. Guhhh.

[lure007]

I think so, too! :)

Thank you for such a lovely comment. xx

[msmurph123]

That was awesome! So much better than their version. ❤❤❤

[lure007]

Thanks so much! xx

[kccalgal]

This was steamy! I'm sure they both thought about it during their stare down. Love that you left Reid stopping Luke.

It took all of Reid’s self-control to do what he did next. He was painfully hard and aching by this point, but he leaned in closer to Luke and answered his unasked question, anyway. “The first time you make me come,” Reid spoke into Luke’s ear, his tone low and sultry, “I want to be buried deep inside you, Luke.”

This line made your story that much more sexy. Rawr!

While watching the clip the sexual tension in that scene was huge. It was the first time I realized that they were attracted to each other. What kills me though is how poorly Luke understood Reid's reaction to him (Hates is guts is what he told Holden) especially when he did a bang up job psychoanalyzing his reaction to Judd.

[lure007]

Thank you for the wonderful comments and insight!

I whole-heartedly agree with your analysis of Luke. Thankfully, he caught on not long after that. xx

[hopperl]

Yes they did just get interesting, why did you stop?! Lol!

Loved it!

[hackysack01]

Lol agreed!!!

[lure007]

:)

[lure007]

Aww, thanks!

You never know - if my muses cooperate, there may even be a sequel. xx