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The Better Man (29/30)

Mar 01, 2011 19:33

Title: The Better Man

Author: Bhumi

Rating: NC-17

Summary: AU- Luke is heartbroken and hopes that a break from his hectic work life and his horrible love life will do him some good. But what he didn’t know is that this one short journey full of fun, laughter and unexpected encounters would change his life forever and would lead him to something he ( Read more... )

luke/reid, !author|artist: bhumimak, atwt, rating: nc-17, fan fiction

Comments 18

aljc100 March 1 2011, 19:53:59 UTC

Ha ha! The mile high club - I knew it ....

I knew this moment had to come, and have been kind of dreading it - but also knew how much I would love it. Possibly my favourite chapter so far - as always, ben almost stole the show. You write his relationships with Reid and Luke so well.

Luke walking backwards in the airport :-(

bhumimak March 1 2011, 20:00:18 UTC

Hee hee! Well, they never got the chance the first time so...why not?! :P

Writing this was so sad...like I said, I am such a sap and I cry at anything so writing these goodbye scenes were hard and just really really sad! :'(

Ben, god, I'm going to miss him so much but he will pop up in the next chapter coz I'm selfish like that! :P

Oh my god, I forgot I had even written that line with Luke walking backwards and I just imagined it and man that is kinda sad!lol!

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I might post the last chapter 2mro if I get it edited and beta'd on time, GAH! I can't believe it's nearly over!

Thank you again! :)

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bhumimak March 1 2011, 20:32:13 UTC

LOOL! It was really sad to think about and write...GAH! I didn't like seperating them AT ALL! :(

Yup, only one more to go! I actually JUST finished it yesterday but it's much lighter and fluffier and Luke and Reid are together in it so I hope it's a decent ending for this part of their story! :)

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! :D

f3d0ragirl March 1 2011, 20:41:02 UTC

my eyes teared up a teeeeeeenyyyyy weeny bit. that said, i am assuming next chapter, they'll be reunited! ;-)

bhumimak March 1 2011, 20:55:16 UTC

Awwww...lol! I just realised how sad this chapter really is!lol! :P

Yup, in the next chapter they will defo be reunited, more than once and it will be a happier and fluffier chapter too! :D

Thank you so much for reading! :)

shar_jere March 1 2011, 20:53:35 UTC

Aaaw i feel like it was just yesterday the boys were just meeting and now it's almost over :(

bhumimak March 1 2011, 20:57:05 UTC

Awww, IKR?! It feels the same to me but then again it feels like they've gone through SO much together in those two weeks, so I totally get where you're coming from! :(

But they will reunite in the next chapter so they won't be apart for too long! :)

Thank you for reading and commenting! :D

msmurph March 1 2011, 20:55:15 UTC

Aww, I cant stand that they have to leave each other. I can't stand that this almost the end. I love the way they met in this story and their journey to get to this point. Please say you're writing a sequel!!!!!!!!

bhumimak March 1 2011, 21:00:24 UTC

I couldn't stand seperating them either...writing it was kinda hard coz I've been so used to them being together, GAH!

Thank you so much and I'm so happy I've had such a positive response to a LuRe AU fic set in the U.K! :D

I will most definitely be writing a sequel :D There are things that need to be sorted out which won't be by the end of this fic, so look out for some one-shots and a sequel soon...if you're not fed up of me that is!lol! :P

Thank you so much! :)