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Fic: Coming Home 22/?

Feb 05, 2011 10:04

Author: PABWECG (aka Patricia) 
Title: Coming Home
Genre/Type: Romance 
Rating: PG-13 to NC-17 
Characters/Pairings: Luke/Reid, Luke/Noah, Lily/Holden, Katie, Casey, Bob, assorted little people, possibly others 
Warnings: None really, except some Nuke intimacy
Disclaimers: I don’t own any of them, zilch, nada…

Summary:Luke and Noah moved to L.A ( Read more... )

!author|artist: pabwecg

Comments 8

joann414 February 5 2011, 15:15:56 UTC

The Luke and Noah conversation was perfect. Both Reid and Luke are getting so emotionally involved with the other. Great chapter.

biu07 February 5 2011, 17:18:07 UTC

OMG! Noah !What a douche you are! Fuck off and let them be happy. Sorry for my language but you are so good at writing that I have the feeling that they are in front of me. Am I a little insane? Maybe, but I enjoy it. I love this story :)

ganeshalemming February 5 2011, 23:11:21 UTC

So well done *sigh*. I feel bad for Noah, he's damaged and he's been clueless, he's been dependent on Luke and resenting him at the same time, and now this is all coming out of the blue for him and he's completely stunned by it, and he really loves Luke, of course he can't let go just like that. This conversation is so spot on Nuke. They always tried to hash everything out in hour-long, earnest talks with little resolution of anything. Luke really is good with words and he shows it here. And I'm cheering him on for enforcing the boundaries - we can talk about us, but I'm not talking to you about Reid. It's part of what Reid has been showing him and telling him - You're in charge of your body. Noah feels entitled to everything Luke is thinking and feeling and experiencing, even now, and Luke is drawing an all-important line in the sand. You don't own me - I own me. *Sigh.* I love this.

And he cooks for Reid. Like Reid wasn't already a TOTAL goner. :D

ltklo February 6 2011, 01:16:15 UTC

Really good contrast of Luke/Reid vs. Luke/Noah. All the Luke/Reid was warm, content and happy. The Luke/Noah was hard edges and bad communication.

I had a big smile about how Reid was acting at the hospital.

He took the file from her, smiling, and looked at it. “Yikes, no wonder. I can hardly read it myself. Let’s see…”

alissablue February 6 2011, 03:21:54 UTC

It's so amazing to read about how much Luke has grown and how he's starting to completely let go of Noah.

This entire chapter was amazing and with each chapter I fall more in love with this fic.