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The Last Doughnut Part 10

Feb 01, 2011 10:30

Title: The Last Doughnut
Author: Marsabi
Summary: When Damian disinherits Luke, can he survive in the “real” world? Will he drive Reid crazy in the process?
Disclaimer: Owned by ATWT
Rating: PG- NC-17 (depends on chapter)
Warning: none
A companion to Camp Queer
Thanks traciamc for the read

PART 10 Up on the roof

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!author|artist: marsabi, rating: nc-17, fan fiction

Comments 39

murgy31 February 1 2011, 15:41:23 UTC

this was fabulous!

marsabi February 1 2011, 17:08:44 UTC

Thanks!

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marsabi February 1 2011, 17:10:19 UTC

Thanks so much! Casey needs help to stop Damian, but he wants to be a friend.
LOL- Well, since they dated on the roof in CQ, I thought this must be the place for Luke's big "I love you"
I am always happy to give them sex as much as possible with no cock-blocks LOL

shadownyc February 1 2011, 16:07:02 UTC

Great chapter! I'm glad Luke and Reid were both able to share their love. That was so lovely.

I'm glad Casey confessed. I like him too much to see him helping the "bad guys".
I hope Reid's plan works against Lily too -- just wishing. ;)

marsabi February 1 2011, 17:11:46 UTC

I know Lily is truly awful here.
Casey has a good heart and couldn't really be bad. Reid's plan will twist things around for awhile...
Thanks for reading!

thefigtree February 1 2011, 16:14:20 UTC

Oh, I love the throwback to the rooftop scenes in Camp Queer. Luke (literally!) declaring his love from the rooftops, hee! And the sex was très chaud!!! *melts* I'm also glad that Reid admitted to Luke that he sucked as a waiter, LOL. Yay to Casey for coming clean! Now they'll have a plan of attack, muahaha! :D

marsabi February 1 2011, 17:13:21 UTC

Thanks! Ever since I started this as a companion piece to CQ, I knew they had to be on that roof again at some point!
I think Reid told him he sucked as a waiter at the right time and for the right reasons...
I appreciate the feedback!

sleeper6 February 1 2011, 16:52:47 UTC

Rooftop shouting and sex was so good! Love how easily they're saying ILY. Good that Casey confessed. Fantastic chapter all around.

marsabi February 1 2011, 17:14:48 UTC

I think Reid would just be simple and upfront about loving Luke, and now he can start to believe that Luke really loves him too- that should all get easier. Most of all, I wanted them to trust each other by here. I appreciate your thoughts, thanks!