Comments | lure_atwt: The Last Doughnut Part 7

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The Last Doughnut Part 7

Jan 24, 2011 09:39

Title: The Last Doughnut ( Read more... )

!author|artist: marsabi, rating: nc-17, fan fiction

Comments 41

joann414 January 24 2011, 15:03:49 UTC

OMG! Poor Luke was in enought emotional pain, and now these idiots attack him physically. How much can one person take? Great, but sad chapter.

marsabi January 24 2011, 16:15:31 UTC

Yeah, sorry. I wanted to stay true to CQ with Lily, and the rest comes like those things sadly can - out of nowhere and when you don't expect it
Thanks for the comment!

shar_jere January 24 2011, 15:39:15 UTC

Lily need a bitch slap how dare she...OMG NOOOOO NOT LUKE

marsabi January 24 2011, 16:16:40 UTC

Lily is still just a few months past how she reacted in CQ when Luke came out...so I can't see her changing too fast, right? And Luke has many people who love him and will rush to him
Thanks for the comment!

shar_jere January 24 2011, 16:20:34 UTC

well she better wise up before she lose him for good!!

marsabi January 24 2011, 17:59:11 UTC

True enough

shadownyc January 24 2011, 15:46:10 UTC

OMG! Please have Henry, Vienna, or Reid find him FAST!!!

I'll be waiting anxiously for the next part.

marsabi January 24 2011, 16:17:16 UTC

I'm working on more soon. And yes, many people love him and will rush to him!
Thanks for the feedback!

f3d0ragirl January 24 2011, 15:57:47 UTC

Omg! No. :-(

God, I hate bashings.

marsabi January 24 2011, 16:20:21 UTC

Me too. But Luke will get through this and get through his disappointment with Lily (if you read the chapter before this -you know too how far gone Reid is for him) It is sad, but I thought realistic too... Thanks for the read and I promise things get better soon

hopperl January 24 2011, 16:01:47 UTC

OMG, when he kissed Reid my thoughts instantly went to that table of college boys and wondered how they would react. Ugh! I just wanted to run Lily over w/ her car. It is so hard to read this b/c I know that people actually have had to live this life as their truth. However, you have written it so well and I love this story even though it saddens me. I know that I have Reid caring for Luke to look forward to (hint hint). :)

marsabi January 24 2011, 16:24:26 UTC

Yeah, I tried to make it happen quickly ...I wanted to stay true to Camp Queer with Lily , and I couldn't see her changing too much - sadly, many parents never come around at all. And the rest is just the horrible kind of things gay men and women can go through when they live openly... Reid is coming to Luke's side soon and I think you will really like what Reid does there ...

Thanks for commenting! It means a lot