Comments | lure_atwt: Brilliancy 11/14

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Brilliancy 11/14

Jan 17, 2011 17:25

Author - vallie82
Title - Brilliancy
Characters - Luke/Reid, Damian
Rating - PG-13
Warnings - None
Summary - A spectacular and beautiful game of chess, generally featuring sacrificial attacks and unexpected moves. Brilliancies are not always required to feature sound play or the best moves by either side.

A/N: So, we have almost reached the end. Have I ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, luke/reid, !author|artist: vallie82, fan fiction

Comments 47

marsabi January 17 2011, 16:35:22 UTC

Oh Yay! I was so happy to see a new chapter. I liked Reid with his friend and to hear his thoughts about his growing complex feelings for Luke. It was cute how she totally sees through Reid's protests....

LOL I can't believe Reid, he is so funny, when he just says "I fucked your son" - talk about blunt. Ha ha! And Damian threatening him - classic.
I love this story. But almost the end? Oh darn...

vallie82 January 17 2011, 17:17:56 UTC

Thank you! It took me a little longer than usual seeing how my vacation has ended and I´m back at work. I thought Reid needed a friend to talk to, and she is like the female version of Reid.

LOL Yeah, Reid really doesn´t think much about other ppls feeling before he speaks. ;P And Damian is Damian, whether he is nice or not. ;P

Yeah, I counted and come to realize that there is only three chapters left. Two of them will probably be a bit longer then usual and but that´s all there is. :) I´m really happy to hear that you like the story tho! :)

rlb_16 January 17 2011, 16:38:43 UTC

I'm not sure Damian is helping luke's cause...but I'm hoping Reid and Luke
will talk. great story!

vallie82 January 17 2011, 17:20:29 UTC

Thank you!

I´m not really sure either that was the best way to approach Reid, although it will make Reid talk to Luke, if only to tell him to get the hell out of his life. ;P

bhumimak January 17 2011, 17:04:02 UTC

YAY! I love Susan, that had to be said, coz she is awesome! :D

LOVED the Reid and Damian talk, LMAO at Reid's bluntness, that's why I love him so....hehe! :P

Can't wait to see what happens next...Reid is going to have to give in and talk to Luke soon, if he doesn't want Damian after him, lol! :P

Love this and love you! xoxo

vallie82 January 17 2011, 17:23:09 UTC

Susan is awesome! And I made her up, all by myself! (And hey! I´m not killing her off!;P)

Reid is a bit blunt, but he wouldn´t be Reid if he wasn´t. ;P And seeing how pissed of he is atm I´m guessing he has a few things to tell Luke!

Again, thank you for all your amazing help! Love you too! <3

bhumimak January 17 2011, 18:35:53 UTC

Bwahahaha! :P

Whoa, I think you're forgetting something here, DEID 4EVA!

If you can have a parallel universe so can I! Or just remember CWC?! :D <3

vallie82 January 17 2011, 19:45:10 UTC

LOL

Well, you just have to write it then wont you? ;P

smoothlikebutta January 17 2011, 17:14:59 UTC

I am glad that Reid wants to confront Luke; hopefully, Luke will get a chance to talk, too.

vallie82 January 17 2011, 17:37:44 UTC

Well, Reid is pretty pissed at the moment, but at least he is on his way to see Luke. :)

f3d0ragirl January 17 2011, 17:33:11 UTC

i dont want this story to end! make it 20 chapters. please. or 30. yeah, 30 is cool. LMAO

:-P

vallie82 January 17 2011, 17:38:59 UTC

LOL well, thank you! Although, I have to admit, I have no idea what I would write in another 16 chapters. ;P