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The Secret of Being A Grimaldi Chapters:12/13

Oct 26, 2010 09:32

Title: The Secret of Being a Grimaldi ( Read more... )

!author|artist: marsabi, rating: nc-17, fan fiction

Comments 8

traciamc October 26 2010, 15:01:11 UTC

I love this - I'm so intrigued! Wow - Damian is such a jerk! I hope that Reid figures out what Damian is up to in time to save Luke. I have no idea how you're going to wrap this up in one more chapter - there's so much going on!

marsabi October 26 2010, 16:24:35 UTC

Thanks! I really appreciate the comments. I think I can do it in three more chapters (at least that is my plan right now).

scoutdaniels October 26 2010, 15:44:51 UTC

interesting tidbit about the Grimaldi's I'm just now learning about. I like that Luke knows the family history of the Grimaldi's. Interesting twist to have Damien at the mercy of his mother, of course its unforgivable that he betrayed Luke's trust by telling Reid about Luke's other power.

I'm scared for how Reid reacts, hopefully the boys will be able to work it out with minimum drama

marsabi October 26 2010, 16:26:27 UTC

Thanks! After I read about Damian's mother issues, it just felt right for the story. It is horrible that Damian broke Luke's trust and is also manipulating him.

The boys are due for a chapter of angst (sorry), but I'm sure love will win out in the end

Thanks for reading!

jem_018 October 26 2010, 19:23:20 UTC

Oh god. Damian's mother is creepy. *shivers*

I know he's at his mother's mercy but I hate him right now for telling Reid about Luke reading his mind.

Oh no. I think Reid is going to freak out. Yikes.

marsabi October 26 2010, 19:42:17 UTC

Thanks for reading! Yeah, Damian did betray Luke here. And yes, there has to be some freaking out soon. The next chapter might be full of sadness, but do not worry - I'm all about the Lure happy ending!

cas74 October 27 2010, 19:05:42 UTC

I never liked Damien. I know a lot of people did, but he always hurt Luke. Poor Luke! I wonder what Reid will do with the info...I dont think he will turn his back on Luke, he is already in love with him. I think he will fight for Luke...am I right???

marsabi October 27 2010, 20:02:16 UTC

The next chapter might be hard for Reid and Luke. It has some tension. But I am all about the Lure happy ending! However, I think they will have to fight for each other.

I think that Damian loved Luke, but his love always = pain. That is something Luke needs to know after Damian (and Noah) ...That love should not be like that.

Thanks for reading! It means a lot!