fic: another lesson to be learned (2/2)
And here is part two!
Title: Another Lesson To Be Learned [2/2] [part one here]
Rating: NC-17 for D/s dynamics, spanking, and sex
Word Count: 8,788 total; 4,703 for this part
Disclaimers: characters’re not mine, only doing this out of affection; title and opening lines from Green Day’s “Blood, Sex, and Booze”
Summary: Charles overdoes things with ( Read more... )
Title: Another Lesson To Be Learned [2/2] [part one here]
Rating: NC-17 for D/s dynamics, spanking, and sex
Word Count: 8,788 total; 4,703 for this part
Disclaimers: characters’re not mine, only doing this out of affection; title and opening lines from Green Day’s “Blood, Sex, and Booze”
Summary: Charles overdoes things with ( Read more... )
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But everything was made all better with the smokin' hawt sexy tiems. GUH.
I LIKE this reaction. :D :D Erik and Charles approve, too.
Next up: as per request of garrideb, what happens when Charles and Erik end up doing recruitment things in different places, and are separated for long enough that Charles starts needing the relief...
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Have fun at work! Help fellow students! :-)
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I think the transition into the actual talking in this part works, as they've had the push towards it at the end of the forst part. Although, actually, I quite like that, despite Charles basically collapsing, they're still both tentative, and aware that it could still all go wrong, and it's not all 'oh no, I am totally wrong, must backpedal now that Charles is vulnerable' from Erik.
Also, the spanking is very nice! ;) (It's one of those kinks that it took me a while to come around to, actually, and in general I'm still a bit wary about the over the knee positioning - that one can come close to humiliation, and also has a flavour of a parent/child relationship, which is not sexy! But here...oh yes... *g*)
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I think the transition into the actual talking in this part works
Oh, good...I was worried about that, and also about the transition from talking to sex, there...but they did need to talk. And they're definitely both right to some extent, and wrong to some extent, which they both need to acknowledge. (Erik is totally right about Charles overdoing things, but equally totally wrong about his initial approach. Charles is being stubborn and reckless and completely correct when he admits that he was really only wanting to listen when Erik's saying things he wants to hear--but he's also right that they need to have those open discussions and trust each other.) And then the sex is...not, like, 'yay, healing sex!', but healing in the sense that they can still want these dynamics, and make this work, because they're both committed to making this work.
(It's one of those kinks that it took me a while to come around to, actually, and in general I'm still a bit ( ... )
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Glad you like this one, though. It's eventually a...rather kinky...fix-it for the Great Beach Divorce. Because of course they're not leaving each other now...
Good news: I've started my 50 first dates and Pride and Prejudice Mcfassy film fics (finally!)
*is excited* Also, you're making me feel bad, as I've not yet begun mine...but I'm entirely looking forward to yours. You're so good with the emotions and the comforting. (Also: come play in the Valentines McFassy Fun with us! See today's post for details. *entices*)
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Oh, I've not read that one! *bookmarks for later* From the first couple of paragraphs, sounds intriguing...
You should join us, at least for Part One of the Valentines! We're hoping lots of people will. And we've got a while before the end of the Film Fest, anyway. (Says the person who's not started hers...) Mmm, P&P. Love that story. And there is a sad lack of more Regency McFassy in this fandom lately. :-)
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This was wonderful, though. Hnnnnggggggggggg
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Glad you liked, love! And thanks for taking time to read despite the travel travail! *appreciates*
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