new fic: love it all

[luninosity]

So...I should be working on this month's Erik/Charles holiday fic, but...instead I wrote some completely random James/Michael fic, it seems. Well, why not?

Title: Love It All
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2,369
Disclaimers: boys are not mine, only doing this out of affection; title from The Kooks’ song of that name.
Summary: all the fluff, seriously! I’m

Comments

[glisterwolf]

Awwwwwwww this is adorable like kittens and rainbows and happy endings and sexy men figuring out how to communicate!! Your dialogue is fantastic, I could tell the exact moment James got upset before Michael had even noticed. And the eavesdropping purple car was great. I've been struggling with writing scary and angsty things for the past few hours but now I'll go to bed smiling -- thank you!!!! :) :)

[luninosity]

I've been struggling with writing scary and angsty things for the past few hours but now I'll go to bed smiling Oh, I'm glad! :D :D That was partly why this fic even exists, too--because I'd been working on the Continuation Of Doom and found myself desperately needing to write something HAPPY. So I completely sympathize about the scary things. :-/

Your dialogue is fantastic, I could tell the exact moment James got upset before Michael had even noticed. Aww, yay! *blushes* I do love writing dialogue for them. I feel like that's one of my strengths (not being immodest, just objective, hopefully?) as an author, and also they're just fun when they do all the back-and-forth! And this one for some reason felt, in my head, very much like a return to some of my earliest James/Michael fic--not sure if it's just thematic, or the length (hey, I can still write short things!), or all the dialogue, but that feeling was fun, too.

As always, thank you...dear! *grin*

[glisterwolf]

Yes, happy things are needed!! I just rewatched part of X2 for the first time since seeing XMFC and ended up BAWLING in the scene where Prof X visits Magneto in his plastic prison... the look on Charles's face when he sees Erik's bruises, the bitterness when Magneto asks if Prof X is going to rescue him, when Magneto says he told Stryker "everything"... *wibbles*... basically I'm currently rereading all the fix-it fics I know and trying to convince myself that they somehow had a happy ending. Have you ever written a fix-it with the older versions of those two?

[luninosity]

Oh, gosh, now I'm picturing that, too! Oh...oh, and the fact that Mystique only rescues him after Charles has NOT done so...*whimpers

[luninosity]

Oh, I forgot this one: short little dialogue future!fic, in which tea fixes everything and Charles abuses a metaphor: http://luninosity.livejournal.com/27779.html#cutid1

ALL THE HAPPY THINGS, EVER. :-)