...and part two of the new fic

[luninosity]

Title: Turn (In Love With The Way You Make Me Wait) [part two of two] [part one here]
Rating: NC-17; see warnings.
Warnings: established consensual D/s relationship, explicit sex, non-explicit mention of past non-con, collars, absolute trust, tiny bit of breathplay (basically, the general warnings for this series, plus a couple of things)
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Comments

[glisterwolf]

Before I begin an overly long and detailed comment I want to say that I love this entire story, your writing is always amazing but I think with every one of these installments I get the characters' reactions more viscerally.

he felt James go abruptly rigid, hovering on the brink of the supernova.

and

the luminous fall of a singularity, space and time utterly forgotten. The gravitational pull caught him, too, enraptured, and dragged him over the brink, into sheer incandescent silence.

YES!!! ASTRO METAPHORS FOR ORGASM FTW!!!!

James might be his, unquestionably, entirely, but the other side of that was true, too: he belonged to James, equally as much, every piece of him, everything inside that lit up when James smiled, or touched him, or said his name.

And this had to be about both of them, together. Because it was.

I absolutely adore this. They are so perfect and in love here, it's given me enough warm fuzzies to knit a scarf by now :D

“You do remember that night about three weeks ago when you made me drink three of

[luninosity]

with every one of these installments I get the characters' reactions more viscerally That is a fantastic compliment, thank you! *beams at laptop*

Those metaphors are your fault. I'm pretty sure of that. *grin* Thank you. And also yay warm fuzzies. I think this part--that moment--needed that feeling, after the worry in the first half about how things were going. Reaffirmation is important.

It feels like he's taking care of Michael in that part, even if Michael doesn't realize it. Because Michael at this point seems to be more on edge than James, and James realizes that some light teasing and snark is the way to get him to relax more SO I LOVE THAT YOU SAY THINGS ABOUT MY FIC THAT MAKE ME THINK, 'WOW, YES, I JUST THOUGHT IT FELT RIGHT WHEN I WROTE IT, BUT YOU HAVE ARTICULATED WHAT I ACTUALLY MEANT BETTER THAN I DID.' Yes yes yes to all of what you say here. And I love that that leads into James's question, and a real honest conversation, in the wake of that reestablishment of normality--because that's also a valid question; it IS

[avictoriangirl]

SO. MUCH. LOVE. FOR THIS. AND YOU. I ... I just don't know what to say except that this is perfect and I have no words. *makes incoherent happy noises*

OMG. We can haz Continuation Of Doom? peasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease? *begs prettily*

[luninosity]

I just don't know what to say except that this is perfect and I have no words. *makes incoherent happy noises* I think that says lots of good things. :D :D

[telperion_15]

There is no world in the English language suitable to express the noise that just came out of my mouth...

I seriously am going have to pretend this is some kind of AU, I think, and that in the 'real world' of this universe, the party is actually happily continuing, and James is getting tipsy on champagne while Michael looks on fondly, and everyone keeps coming up and hugging them both...

Then I can read this at the same as sticking my fingers in my ears and going LA LA LA LA LA LA LA NOT HAPPENING!

*headdesks*

[luninosity]

There're reasons why I wasn't going to write this, and why I kept describing it as sort of an AU continuation! I want them to be happy, too! But you all told me I should! *evil laugh*

He's going to be okay, though. Eventually. They'll find him. And then we get all those hospital scenes, and desperately worried Michael...

[nianeyna]

...JESUS FUCK, WOMAN. Happy birthday to me.

also you should put this series up on AO3. Because of reasons. Especially since this arc is (almost? you mentioned something about rewriting a little bit of it) finished. I need my comfort fic to be as easy-access as possible, okay. ♥

[luninosity]

Happy birthday to you, indeed! *grin* Um, enjoy the slightly belated present?

I...should probably make an account over there, shouldn't I. *clings to familiarity of LJ* New things are scary! I am a medievalist!

Yeah, I think I want to rewrite the first one, to make it fit a little better with the rest. (I didn't know it was going to be a series, and certainly not so emotionally charged, when I wrote that one! And that was my first porn ever!) And I've never been entirely happy with the ending dialogue of that one. A little awkward.

I might also tweak the last one (er, the last one for now; people seem to be demanding the Continuation of Doom, but that's a new story arc) just a little, because we've learned that James's past is much more traumatic than I'd thought originally, and they probably get over that encounter just a little TOO quickly--not too much, because James really is fine, but should be a tad more shaken? But I think that one needs less fixing than the first one. *shrug*

As always, happy to know you liked! :D :D

[shayzgirl]

I wish I could write something more coherent of a reply beyond love this, always love this little verse and all it's wonderfulness and love you for writing it, but I've been up too long, on too little sleep and I've probably got a cold or coming down with one, so my brain is starting to shut down, but I had to keep reading because I couldn't not read and OMG! always. :D And now I go crawl into my nest of blankets (which, thank you again) and curl up for the night. <33333

[luninosity]

love this, always love this little verse and all it's wonderfulness and love you for writing it, ...that's fine, I'll just cuddle this comment for always. :D :D

A cold? Aww. Not fun times. *offers virtual tea* I have many types. I can share. And blanket-nests are ALWAYS a comfortingly good idea. :-)

[disbelief11]

As I read this, there was a small percentage of my mind thinking "Oh, this is a great line to quote as being one of my favorites". However, I gave up when that happened often enough that I'd essentially (and once again) be quoting the entire thing back to you.

Plus there's the part of my mind that's still imagining the sensation of the leather collar on James' lovely neck, and the feel of it under Michael's fingers as he put it on, touched, and tugged at it, and the feeling for James when Michael did all of that. That is a large part. Large!

Good thing these two make my heart grow so much because I adore them together. Just like I adore you!

[luninosity]

...that happened often enough that I'd essentially (and once again) be quoting the entire thing back to you. Authorial ego adores flattery! And--apparently--alliteration! (No, I couldn't come up with a better replacement word for 'flattery', there...)

That is a lovely thing to imagine, is it not? So much sensation, so intense, so much trust. (And, hopefully, so much erotic imagery...it IS porn, after all! Even if I can't write porn without All The Emotions.)

Adoration all around, then! *hugs you* Also, That is a large part. Large! ...I'm pretty sure James has said this to Michael, at some point, you know. Exclamation point and all. :-p