bang three times on the ceiling (if you want me)

[lunayeppeo]

title: bang three times on the ceiling (if you want me)
type: oneshot (5829 words)
fandom: shinee
pairing: au!onkey
rating/warnings: pg for cussing
author's notes: another one inspired by a song; this time, it is tony orlando and dawn's "knock three times". beta'd by meicdon13 and pinkweather~ <3

Comments

[pinkweather]

aaaaaaa yay lira you posted it \o/ \o/ \o/

this was so cute and sweet and everyone was perfect ♥ i love your kibum, he is so bitchy and sweet and awkward and i can imagine him being just like this, he is so precious. and your jongkey bffery is so cute i don't even. and jinki!! jinki and the chicken in his heart omg. and and messing up his entire apartment and ending up not being able to reply properly, ahahaha i loled irl. his adorkable fail is also precious ♥ yay this was so great write moar shinee fic plox :3 ♥

/end retarded comment

[lunayeppeo]

uwaaaa thank you for the love and support \o\ \o/ /o/

Haha, I don't think I've ever worried so much about characterization as I did for this fic. I'm glad everyone came out okay! Hee, Kibum was so much fun to write, as was the JongKey dynamics (though I swear I kind of curled up inside when I read yours ahahaha). And I couldn't not add Jinki's little song, the precious dork that he is! With everything wujuju.

I shall do my best to! Thank you so much! ♥

not retarded i love this comment so much <3

[xxqod]

Oh this!
I see Kibum totally doing something with fashion :) IRL too, he can really achieve something I think, if he wants to ^^

But I find it funny the walls etc are so thin he can just hear Jinki talking about everything XD I wouldn't like it though... '^^

Kibum's friendship with Jonghyun is always so hilarious XD Jjong's so retarted sometimes and Key smacking him is just <3

Totally love it when they try to give Jinki the note with a fishing line and his armband XD lol. I was laughing so hard when Minho told them he just gave the note to Jinki XD

Jinki's clumsiness with the banging is also funny, and his co-worker xD lol, "Just kiss him" XDXDDD
He also heard Kibum trough the ceiling :D

The ending with the movie night is so lovely :)
Really liked it!
<3 ~~

[lunayeppeo]

Yeah! When I was thinking up a job for Kibum, I realized I couldn't really visualize him doing anything else but working with fashion (aside from music). He could probably go further with that if he chooses to pursue it~

Haha, yeah, it's kind of an uncomfortable situation, actually. I like to think the noise came from the balcony more than through the floors - a little less creepy that way. XD

I love the JongKey BFFery, and I'm glad I managed to pull it off! It's just a really fun close bond that's great to watch.

Somehow, I think Kibum and Jonghyun would really drag Taemin into this kind of thing, while Minho just watches them and intervenes when he deems it necessary, haha!

I think I kind of had Jokwon in mind when I wrote the part about the co-worker, but it could be anyone, really. And I figured if Kibum could hear him, Jinki could, too!

Thank you very very much for reading and taking the time to detail everything! <3

[starstruckpanda]

Okay. Like. I don't even. The characterization was perfect. The Jongkey bffery was pure ♥. And Minho just giving the note to Jinki dfghjkl so Minho.

Please to not be DIAF any time soon. c:

♥

[lunayeppeo]

Thank you so much! Characterization was probably what I worried most about here (aside from pulling off such a weird plot), but I'm really glad you found it fine! Jongkey BFFery was one of my favorite parts to write, as was Minho just handing the note over, lol.

I-I shall do my best? *o*

♥

[sm16]

good job! * w *

i loved the fishing rod part! Especially where they needed something shinee to attract jinki to get the note. And failed anyway ^^;

and the concept's really nice. It kinda reminded me of breakfast at tiffany's, but that's prolly because I just watched it recently ^^;

*glomp*

[lunayeppeo]

Darling! I'm so glad you like it! ;_____;

Hee the mental image was so vivid that I just had to write it even the shinee part~

I've never seen "Breakfast at Tiffany's" before, but it kind of seems that way, doesn't it? Though perhaps a little more wacky. XD

*hugglomps!*

[ayaa_chandesu]

OMG haven't read such good OnKey in ages. XD
Mem-ing this, if you don't mind?
Thanks for sharing :D

[lunayeppeo]

O-oh, wow. Yes, please feel free to do so! I'm giddy that this seems to merit mem-ing! *A*

Thank you so much~