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Doctor Who Fic - Not Here

Jul 03, 2007 00:18

Title: Not Here
Rating: NC17
Fandom: Doctor Who
Timeline: Set within 3x12 - The Sound of Drums.
Summary: Jack and Martha find some peace with their feelings for the Doctor. Jack/Martha/Doctor.

A/N: Many thanks to daera23 for the quick beta.

( “We’re not really here, are we?” )

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lunasky July 3 2007, 11:19:46 UTC

Thank you :) And it took me a second to figure it out, but that icon rocks.

nm973 July 3 2007, 05:17:52 UTC

!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And EEEEEEEEEEEE

And finally, HAHAHAHA.

OF COURSE Jack has to spell everything out. I laughed out loud. Loved the whole concept of the perception filters and them unable to see each other. And Jack! (Still can't stop laughing about that sexual machine.) This was a great Martha story, too - loved her acknowledgment that she was independent and smart and strong. And she got both of the hotties! Thanks for hitting my kinks. You rule!!!

lunasky July 3 2007, 11:23:01 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you liked it. I was worried about not doing it right (you know how this type of thing can go so very cliche so quickly). But I needed to do something with Jack and even Martha. The ending broke my heart a little (mostly with Jack) but I just wanted to give this to them at least in my mind.

Thanks again sweetie.

darklady7 July 3 2007, 07:46:01 UTC

S**t! It has me so hot. I held my breath when Jack sexed Martha and bjed the Doctor. It is one of the most erotic stories I ever read. I meme it now.

lunasky July 3 2007, 11:26:13 UTC

I'm very glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.

jamie_dakin July 3 2007, 08:49:26 UTC

I think I really needed this. One of those few times were the porn is actually part of a plot and my god the characterizations are wonderful.

Spot-on with their voices and thoughts and just... gah.

Plus - and this is completely credited to the writing because it never happens to me with Martha/Doctor - I could literally see it playing out like a slow, glorious film. A marvelously HOT film at that. I mean seriously, this right here? Certifiably wank-worthy fic my friend.

lunasky July 3 2007, 11:30:00 UTC

I needed this as well. The finale left me a little heartbroken and I just wanted them to have this tiny thing from the Doctor, just for this little while at least. And I'm very glad to know the characterizations worked...I was a little worried this would just end up being a PWP. (Not that there's anything wrong with that--just not what I was going for if that makes sense with a fic filled with smut). :)

Thank you!

kau666 July 3 2007, 09:12:22 UTC

Um. wow. *fans self*

lunasky July 3 2007, 11:30:27 UTC

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)