NEW FIC! Kurobasu: The Match Maker (Ao/Kise; Kaga/Kuro; Pg-15)

[lunaryu]

The Matchmaker
Fandom: Kuroko no Basuke
Rating: T/Pg-15
Genre: Romance/Humor/Drama
Pairing: Aomine/Kise; established Kagami/Kuroko

Summary: It's decided that Kuroko will be the matchmaker between a very whiny Kise and a very stubborn Aomine, much to Kagami's chagrin.

Disclaimer: Fujimaki Tadatoshi owns Kuroko no Basuke and its characters. Luna only

Comments

[ichigohaatsu]

Awww~ Crying Kise is just so cute! I watch the clip of his pretend crying so many times!!

Kiss Kiss! Go Ahomine!

[lunaryu]

Ahahaha, I was actually quite worried if it was okay to make Kise cry so much. His fan-base is surprisingly VERY LARGE ^^;

Well, now Aomine will do his best to stop that cry *grins*

Thanks a lot for the comment! XDDD

[denshi_no_ultra]

Quite a nice fic! It was really touching to read about poor confused Kise... Kuroko's speech was really introspective, it shows how good his observation skills are.

A little writing tip - just use the names of the characters instead of eye colours and hair colours.

[lunaryu]

Thank you very much for the comment and compliment! XD
I'm glad it's quite nice for your taste ^__^.

Eh? You think so? Is it too confusing? I meant... their hair color is quite different, so... I thought it's okay to distinguish them that way.

Um... do you think it's better to use the repetition of their names in the fic?

[denshi_no_ultra]

Kise-kun is my favourite, I'm always happy to see more fics about him :D

You are overusing the adjectives, I think. All the readers know what their hair and eyes and skin look like, so what is the point of mentioning it again and again?

It just sounds unnatural, you would not normally refer to, let's say, your friend, as 'the blue-eyed woman known by the name of Jane', you would just say Jane.

[lunaryu]

Hmm... got it.
Next time I'll pay attention to it when I make the next part!
Thanks for the notification!

[neko_miyuki]

Yeah AoKise sequel *squeals* ! ! I love your Kuroba's fics, I've read quite a lot but yours are my favourites <3 ! This part was sweet really ! I love how Aomine is both shy, yet a bit calculating (I mean the ball thing !) Crying Kise was a bit annoying to me, I mean I'm just feeling like all the cries in manga and anime are pantomine or dramatics. I mean he can show some seme faces when he gets serious xD ! But don't worry it's just my babblings ^__^' ! Anyways, despite my reluctances about Kise's personality, I LOVE how Kise and Aomine react when they found out each other feelings thanks to Kuroko. It was just "kyaaah" xD so sad yet so sweet and great moment <3 ! Aaah Kagami was so cool there too ! I mean when he phones to Ahomine and they eavesdropping Kuroko and Kise ! His little fight with Aomine was funny too. Kuroko was so nice too ! We all know how good Kuroko's observation skills are but I was astonished by how you used it ! <3

[lunaryu]

Why... thank you! That's such an honor for me hearing a greatest compliment from my reader! XDDD Thanks a lot! Your words will be imprinted in my heart! XD

Yeah, Kise can be a HOT seme if he wants to~, but for some reasons, he's okay when he's crying too. I don't know why, but the personality fits, rather than Aomine or Midorima or even Kuroko *lol*

Yeah, well... that's why it's called 'The Matchmaker', right? *grins*

Yep. Kagami is cool! XD And his bickering with Aomine is indeed to add the humor *lol*

Ahaha, thanks again. But I just bring it to the next level. Kuroko is so used to be alone, so that's why he can observe people unnoticed so easily.

Well, it will get complicated if Aomine likes Tetsu as well. It's sweeter when they thought they were in "one-sided" relationship after all. Kuroko likes Aomine, Aomine likes Kise, and Kise, due to his misunderstanding likes Kuroko. It's actually kind of funny.

Kay. Will do my best for the next part as well!

[neko_miyuki]

Ah ah it's always a great pleasure to comment your fics =) -specially the Kuroba ones- !
Ha ha sure ! I don't have an opinion concerning Kuroko -I mean as you stated it yourself is used to be alone so I think a crying Kuroko is fine too as long as he doesn't act childish xD- but I can't imagine Aomine or Midorima crying !

Your humour is the best too...Probably because it makes me think of KHR or Gintama ! I love this kind of joke =w= !

I know what you mean for a two shots it's too complicated to have this kind of story. Hum sometimes I'm not fond of all the "one-sided" love because it looks like they're all so dense xD ! But well, there it's fine 'cause we're talking about Ahomine and Kise xD !

Ah I forgot to say this too : it was so fun how Kagami is acting mature and "you know it" ! I mean in "Kissing practice" he was the dense one and there he's playing like he knows -not everything but- some things. I don't know if you played on it but it was quite nice x) !

[lunaryu]

Thank you again! Your words are too kind! XD
Yeah, Kuroko is so used to being alone that he must have cried alone a lot T_T

Ehehe, Gintama's humor is the best! XD
Eh, KHR?? Really? Maybe I'm influenced by that anime as well, huh... *lol*

Ahaha, I love simple things, that's why... unless I want to get serious in making plot for multichapter story... maybe I will make an AU one, later...

*lol* Kagami has the heads up from Kuroko after all, and he watched that game between Touou and Kaijou, right? So I guess he kind of understands it *hearts*

And Kagami is dense because it's about him. If it's about someone else... like when he thought Kuroko might have a thing for Aomine (because it was true at some degrees)