Part B of Twin Complex--Continued?
~Twins’ Complex-Continued?~
(Part B)
A few days later…
"This is freaking ridiculous!" Bossun shouted while banging the closed metal storage door in front of him.
"What's going on?" Sasuke stared at the door with trepidation in his eyes.
"I totally have no the slightest idea," Bossun gave the door a last kick before he rested his forehead on the cold metallic surface. "It seems like we're locked in."
…
"What?!" Sasuke's voice sounded an octave higher after a brief pause. "How on earth did that happen?!"
"I just told you. I have no fucking idea." Bossun cringed at his own bad language. He had never cussed so much, but hell. He was excused this time. He should be, because lady luck really fucked his life over.
Being trapped in a room full of nothing but dusty stuffs was bad enough, but worse, it had to be together with the source of his frustration. Yep, it was the worst. Bossun didn't want to talk about things because Sasuke had made it clear that they had to forget about what happened between them before, despite the lack of success mainly from Bossun's part. He frankly couldn't help thinking about it whenever he saw Sasuke and now they were stuck together in a narrow space. Naturally, his brain took a nosedive into that sort of thought.
It was increasingly difficult for Bossun to think about anything else in such tight spot. He just hoped that Sasuke didn't notice his predicament.
"Oh, no…! No way. Are we really trapped in here?" Sasuke tried the knob by himself. As predicted, it didn't budge. He turned at Bossun in a slightly perplexed expression.
"Yeah… rusty metal, I guess…" Bossun sighed. Still, he vaguely had heard something click from the outside before, like the lock being secured. He wasn't sure because he and Sasuke had been conversing about how to move the matt outside because their gym teacher had asked for their help in preparing the next lesson earlier. Bossun and Sasuke's class would have a joint gym class that day after all.
"Then what should we do? This place has no window," Sasuke started to look for alternative way out by checking out other spots, but Bossun just sat down on the matt, sighing once more.
"Leave it be. It's still school period. Someone is bound to notice we're missing if we don't get back to our respective classes. They will look for us." At least Bossun could use the time to catch on sleep. He hadn't been sleeping properly because he was too conscious of Sasuke's presence in the same room as him.
Sasuke was quiet for a moment, a slight frown on his brow. "Aren't you too calm in this situation?"
"Complaining about it won't get us out faster, will it?" Bossun laid down, yawning. "Be quiet for a bit. I want to take a nap." He closed his eyes afterwards, trying his best to ignore the slight dip of the matt when Sasuke sat down beside him.
"I'm not okay with skipping classes. It won't be a good example to the other students…!" Sasuke made a whining noise, though it wasn't that noticeable, but Bossun recognized it anyway. He opened one of his eyes, peeking mutely at Sasuke who rested his forehead on his bent knees, his arms looped around his legs.
"You seem tired," he commented a few moments later.
"Couldn't really sleep well…" Sasuke muttered slowly in quiet voice, his tone deflating.
"I thought so. You were kind of restless these past nights," Bossun closed his open eye once again.
"How come you know that?" there was wonder in Sasuke's voice.
"Because I couldn't really fall asleep either," Bossun admitted and there was a surprised 'oh' from Sasuke.
And then the room was uncomfortably noiseless before Sasuke spoke again.
"Sorry, did I… disturb your sleep?"
Bossun let out a suffering sigh before he gave up on trying to fall asleep, and opened his eyes fully instead. "I already can't sleep because I'm thinking too much."
"About?"
"What do you think?" Bossun didn't realize he could spit so much sarcasm in his tone as he deadpanned at Sasuke.
"How should I know?" Sasuke grumbled in apparent indignation.
Bossun got up and stared at Sasuke for a few seconds until he could see his twin squirm slightly. "What?" he looked back at Bossun then, looking bothered.
"Sasuke, about that thing the other day…" Bossun tried again.
"Oh my God. Are we talking about that here?!" Sasuke squeaked and immediately covered his ears.
"I'm as uncomfortable as you are! Stop being so evasive! We need to address this issue eventually, you know! I'd rather suffer talking now than drag this thing along longer because I want to hurry up and put it behind us and go back to how we used to be without feeling this… this awkward and embarrassing feeling whenever our eyes meet!"
Alright, Bossun officially exploded and Sasuke visibly winced because his voice got louder and louder and at the end, he was practically shouting. Now, he panted heavily, feeling exerted just by talking (or very possibly yelling). He scratched his head curtly in frustration since Sasuke had unnaturally become quiet.
"Look, Sasuke, I'm sorry, okay? I know it's kind of off-putting for me to get… aroused in that kind of situation, but come on! Forgive me already. I promise I will never show you such unsightly state again. I swear!" Bossun was completely earnest when he said it. As much as difficult it was to accomplish whenever he and Sasuke were in the same vicinity. As long as Sasuke gave Bossun another chance, he could do it. He'd die trying if he had to.
"Wait, wait! Wait! Turn back a second. You think I'm angry about that?" Now Sasuke turned a ridiculous look at Bossun and he was legitimately lost. Because, uh… wasn't it always about that? "We are teenagers, Yuusuke. It's completely normal for us to have such reaction to wet dreams." He let out an exasperated huff, a tint of pink on his cheeks.
"Then what's going on with us? Why are we acting this way?" Bossun was really confused. Surely, Sasuke's flushing face turned him on, that's why he was freaking out. But he was trying to control it. It was Sasuke's reaction that puzzled him to no end. He thought Sasuke was mad at him with the way he was avoiding his gaze all the time, but apparently, it wasn't just that. "Tell me. What should I do to make it up to you then?"
"You don't have to do anything at all! It's me, okay?! I'm the one thinking strangely!" Sasuke snapped, raising his voice slightly, and his face… god, his face looked like it was about to explode in total shame. It was so troubled and scarlet, heat practically radiating from it.
"I don't get it," Bossun threw his hands up.
"I got excited seeing you aroused, okay?!"
Bossun widened his eyes at that, so did Sasuke as he slapped his mouth shut. He looked panicked for a second and Bossun was still gaping as Sasuke promptly hid his face behind his knees, making a mortified kind of whimper.
"Sasuke…" Bossun didn't know what to say to that. Like, whoa, seriously? Did Sasuke just tell him that he got wound up witnessing Bossun… getting hard?
"I know it's odd and disturbing and god… that's so embarrassing. But I couldn't-… I can't help it. My body just reacts that way! A-and I knew you'd be disgusted if you found out, so I tried to avoid it, but I just kept remembering it when I saw you and it was… I don't know what to do anymore, Yuusuke. I'm really weird, aren't I?"
Desperation bled into his quivering voice and Bossun felt like an idiot for missing it at all. He was too busy thinking about his own problem that he didn't notice Sasuke agonizing over the same thing as him. They were afraid that the other would get repulsed and disgusted upon finding out that they got turned on over each other.
No, Bossun was sure it was pretty unusual for brothers to feel this way about one and another, but at least they weren't alone in this. "Sasuke," he patted Sasuke's shoulder with care and he could feel the boy tense slightly under his touch before he was gradually relaxing as he didn't pull his hand away.
Sasuke hesitantly lifted his face and he looked so vulnerable right then such that Bossun wanted to hold him close in his arms. "Yuusuke?"
"I get… the same problem as you, you know? I get… excited when I see you blush," Bossun averted his gaze slightly, very embarrassed with his admittance, but he kept facing Sasuke because he needed Sasuke to know that he wasn't alone.
"Eh?" Sasuke looked stunned. "It wasn't… because of a dream?"
Bossun shook his head. "I was perfectly fine before you fell over me, but seeing your expression got me… um," he couldn't help flushing at that and Sasuke's eyes widened.
"Oh, oh," yeah, that happened as a realization dawned on Sasuke's expression.
"I wanted to apologize right away, but you kept avoiding me after that. I thought you were angry at me… and might be repulsed," he kept talking, determined to let it all out so there was no misunderstanding anymore.
"I-I wasn't! I…" Sasuke swallowed and he looked at Bossun in the eyes when he admitted. "I was just embarrassed, a- and maybe freaking out a little when I realized I was-…"
"Turned on?" Bossun helped and a faint blush colored Sasuke's cheeks prettily as he nodded.
"Aren't we completely weird?" Sasuke asked again after that. He looked rather scared for some reason and Bossun didn't like seeing the anxiety in Sasuke's face.
"Most likely, but… I have a theory for that," Bossun let go of Sasuke's shoulder and the other boy seemed at a loss as Bossun looked upward at the ceiling. "It's probably because we share the same blood. I'd always thought that I was alone in this world the moment I found out that I wasn't my mother's son. I was angry that time, in denial of why it had to be me and not someone else. But then mom got really hurt because I thought that way and I felt like an ungrateful ass because she had loved me as her own son, no less than she had loved Rumi. I got over my grief of losing my identity pretty quickly and warmed to the idea that family isn't only defined by blood relation. We can actually choose them and I am so thankful that I have mom and Rumi as my family, despite the constant fear that it can't last forever. Because liking it or not, when I get older, Rumi gets older and mom gets older, there's a high chance that we have to part ways, to live our own lives someday. And it scares me… it does frighten me because then… then I will be alone….
"But when I found out your existence through your foster father… it was the first time I felt that I wasn't truly alone. There's someone in this world that share my blood. Someone that won't be able to severe our connection even though we're hostile to each other, because we're tied by blood… Whatever happens, you'll always be my twin brother and the thought comforts me, like… really relieves me from that constant worry."
Bossun turned once again to face Sasuke and he smiled, noting Sasuke's dazed expression. "Getting you so close to me after being separated for more than 16 years… it's kind of surreal, but it also makes me giddy. I get annoyed at you pretty easily because we're so alike and yet so different at the same time. It's like having a reflection that has their own thoughts and ideas, and yet I can't separate myself from them. You… you give meaning for me to live in this vast-vast world, Sasuke. I feel like I'll be alright, as long as you're here."
"Yuusuke…" Sasuke looked at him with open, heartfelt eyes.
"Sorry, I'm rambling, aren't I?" Bossun chuckled and Sasuke shook his head.
"I… think the same thing," he admitted, a small smile adorning his face. "When I knew for the first time that I had a brother, a real, biological, twin brother, still alive and had been there around me the whole time since I entered high school, I also felt enlightened. It's like current electricity coursing through my heart and body and it makes me… lightheaded. It makes me… want to feel more of that mysterious feeling, if only we can stay close more often… I think," Sasuke's cheeks pinked again and Bossun couldn't help thinking how adorable he was.
"We can, you know. If your parents have come home, I can occasionally stay over at your place and vice-versa," Bossun bumped at his shoulder and Sasuke looked upward at him in surprise.
"I… didn't think that before," he admitted.
Bossun laughed slightly. "It's because you're too stiff."
They stayed in comfortable silence afterwards. It seemed that most of their issues were resolved. Well, Bossun thought that way at least, but Sasuke had never ceased to surprise him for being so unpredictable.
"Yuusuke, I have a favor to ask you," he said out of blue and Bossun eyed him questioningly with a raising eyebrow. "I- I think, uh…" Sasuke averted his gaze again, stuttering slightly while his face flushing. "Um, will… will you… kiss me?"
#
The way Yuusuke dropped his jaw was exceedingly priceless. It was hysterically funny if only Sasuke hadn't been in the verge of combusting himself.
"W-w-what the hell are you asking?!" and yeah, predictably, Yuusuke freaked out, eyes as wide as saucers and face as red as tomato, and oh, he had such entertainingly fastidious embarrassed expression.
"I-I want to test something…! I want to make sure!" Sasuke blurted out, reasoning.
"T-test… what test? Make sure of what?!" Yuusuke's expression was still mortified, entirely taken aback, but Sasuke could almost hear curiosity in his tone as well.
"You know… that I- I mean, we are kind of attracted to each other, right? So… just once I want to- uh, to make sure that it's just a phase. T-that the urge will pass eventually and we'll be okay after… Is-is that… not acceptable?" Sasuke threw him a shy, insecure glance and Yuusuke squawked a little in response.
"Y-you… that kind of thing…! Are you serious?!" Yuusuke flailed in earnest, seeming to be baffled, but he looked like very intrigued as well, at least in Sasuke's eyes, as if he were dying to try the possibility too. "Or did you hit your head somewhere?!"
"There's no way I'd joke about something like this, would I?" Sasuke was offended that Yuusuke would even think that. He was completely serious; as grave as a heart attack. He had thought this through after all. He indeed wanted to try it at least once. "And no, my head is totally fine. Besides, it'd be better if we get it done now to appease our curiosity than have to constantly wonder what it would be like…" he added more quietly, fidgeting slightly.
Yuusuke was, apparently, quite in a tight corner. He seemed reluctant since he made such difficult expression, but then again, his face was still impossibly red, like he couldn't help such reaction and it caused Sasuke to feel rather hopeful. "Alright, let's do this." Finally, Yuusuke conceded and Sasuke jerked upward, looking at him once again in total surprise.
"You'll do that?"
"You ask for it, don't you?" Yuusuke countered while eyeing him in something akin to fond exasperation. It made Sasuke's heart skip a beat before fluttering again in staccato. He might have developed some kind of heart disease at the rate of its pounding.
"T-then… p-please," Sasuke braced himself, actually arranged himself to sit in proper seiza (1) with both hands resting on his lap, tilted his chin up and shut his eyes quite tensely.
"Sheesh, don't make such forced expression. Are you trying to be cute? Because that's not cute at all, totally defeating the purpose," Yuusuke huffed.
"W-wha-? I'm not trying to be cute!" Sasuke protested, trying to hide his embarrassment with something more familiar, like righteous indignation, at the patronizing tone. Though, it was most likely failing because when Sasuke opened his eyes to glare at him, Yuusuke made an amused smirk instead.
"That's a lie, though," Yuusuke reached his hand forward to carefully cup one of Sasuke's cheeks and Sasuke couldn't help his breath hitching at the contact. His eyes were forced to look into Yuusuke's lowered gaze and those dark golden orbs were really fascinating that he couldn't look away from them. "I can't help thinking that every expression Sasuke makes is adorable," he whispered and Sasuke swallowed the sudden tightness in his dry throat.
"Yuu-…" Sasuke's line was cut with a thumb ghosting over his lower lip and he gasped feeling the rough pad of Yuusuke's calloused finger on his sensitive skin. He could feel his face heat, both from Yuusuke's touch and his flattering words.
"For your information, I've never done this before, so… don't expect too much," Yuusuke warned.
Sasuke held down a sudden urge to snort. "I don't exactly know what to expect since it's going to be my first time too."
Yuusuke gave him a small, fond smile. "That… that's good then, it will be totally our first together…" he paused for a moment and glanced at Sasuke's eyes again pointedly. "You're sure it's okay for you to do it with me? Don't you want to save this experience for the one you actually love?"
Sasuke was rather annoyed because Yuusuke was stalling. "I wouldn't be asking you for it if I had anyone with whom I'd rather have this experience more than you." He didn't actually realize what he was saying until Yuusuke enlarged his eyes and hung his jaw, totally astounded, and Sasuke backtracked, couldn't help blushing hard at his accidental 'confession'.
"Really, now?" Yuusuke's voice was slightly uneven and his cheeks reddened even more if it was possible. Besides, his expression was slightly… Sasuke didn't know what happened, but his irises darkened considerably, and he was leaning into him more boldly and Sasuke was actually still unprepared for it when Yuusuke shifted his gaze down before he dropped a chaste kiss on Sasuke's unsuspecting lips.
When it clicked on Sasuke's head, he wanted to kiss back, but Yuusuke already pulled away, seeming to search for his reaction. "How was it?"
"Y-you…! Don't catch me off guard like that! I haven't…! I demand a repeat of that action!" Sasuke's voice was trembling and too high for his liking and his face… shit. It felt like it was flamed for sure, because seriously, he was too shocked to feel anything at all.
Yuusuke actually snickered at him and Sasuke wanted to get angry, but then Yuusuke pulled Sasuke's face towards his own once again and planted another kiss on his lips. This time Sasuke was ready and kissed back as he closed his eyes, to experience the kiss more prominently. He could feel the contour of Yuusuke's lips. They were surprisingly soft, rather dry, but they were supple and it was… nice. Very nice.
Sasuke reached to grip on Yuusuke's uniform at his chest, angled his face a little to the side so he could find a more comfortable position to deepen the kiss. It was only a simple, ordinary kiss, just lips meeting another lips. There was nothing remotely dirty, but somehow, the shiver in Sasuke's chest was gradually increasing and there was something… wet, sweeping at his lower lip and he couldn't help a soft gasp escaping his mouth. His grip on the fabric at Yuusuke's chest tightened slightly.
Yuusuke pulled back once again and Sasuke opened his eyes slightly, noticing Yuusuke's rather unsure expression. "Why did you stop?" He didn't understand. It felt good for him. Didn't Yuusuke feel the same?
"If I go further than this, I'll want more," Yuusuke admitted, his heated gaze not releasing its focus, alternating on between Sasuke's eyes and lips.
"Oh," Sasuke widened his eyes slightly in understanding, but then he didn't exactly want to stop either. He still wanted to feel that exciting, wonderful feeling from kissing Yuusuke. "T-then, it's okay," he said, softening his expression to show Yuusuke that he was alright with it, that he gave Yuusuke permission to do more.
Yuusuke's breath caught at that and he reached his other hand to curve possessively on Sasuke's neck. "You… you are too dangerous, Sasuke," he whispered breathily and without further ado surged forward to claim another kiss from Sasuke's pliant mouth, and this time, it was harder, deeper, more desperate and Sasuke couldn't help but groan at the intensity of this kiss.
Yuusuke bit his lower lip lightly, earning him another surprised gasp from Sasuke and as he opened his mouth instinctively, Yuusuke slipped his tongue inside, invading and exploring his oral cavity. Another rippled moan came from the sensation of Yuusuke's tongue touching and caressing his inside, licking the wall around, the roof and the gums and then curling around Sasuke's own tongue. It felt so amazing that he could actually taste the hints of strawberry and lemon from the kiss. It was probably from some candies or squashes that Yuusuke had consumed, he wasn't sure. However, there was also a unique essence mixed in there that Sasuke couldn't quite identify. It was tangy and sweet, and he had a distinct sense that it was Yuusuke's natural flavor.
Sasuke didn't realize that he had moved his hands and arms to loop them around Yuusuke's neck, pulling him closer as he was plundering Sasuke's mouth. Their saliva was mixing and by the time he felt his lungs burn from the lack of oxygen and they had to part to take the necessary air, Sasuke was panting, gasping and breathing heavily. Yuusuke wasn't in better condition, but his hands were moving down slowly, mapping Sasuke's collarbone and chest, and Sasuke didn't even notice when his uniform buttons had been opened and that he had been laying down on the matt, Yuusuke's body slightly looming above him.
"Yuu-" He actually had no idea what he was calling Yuusuke for, but Yuusuke was half lidded and he seemed totally dazed and out of his mind as his fingers touched the bare skin of Sasuke's chest and Sasuke- "Ah!" shuddered.
"Sasuke…" Yuusuke's voice was rough, so deep that it tickled Sasuke's ear as he nuzzled his neck. He licked Sasuke's earlobe and Sasuke gasped again, groaning low when Yuusuke suddenly bit down at his nape, just above his jugular vein.
"Yuusuke…!" Sasuke's fingers were tangling in Yuusuke's hair, his other hand clinging on his back and Sasuke felt Yuusuke's knee between his legs moving, dropping pressure to his groin and he couldn't help drawing a long moan at the sensation.
"Hey… hey, Sasuke…" Yuusuke exhaled quite loudly, gasping his name as he took Sasuke's hand with his own, tangled their fingers together and then pinned it down above his head. "Can I…?"
Sasuke honestly didn't understand what Yuusuke was asking permission for, but he could care less because his brain couldn't really think at the moment, completely clouded by the fog of arousal. "Yeah, yes…! Yuusuke…!" He bucked his hips upward and made contact with Yuusuke's want and oh, holy, it felt incredible. Yuusuke groaned near his ear before once again he latched open mouthed kisses on his neck, down to his clavicle and to his chest, alternating biting, licking and sucking; creating marks on Sasuke's flawless skin.
The storage room was filled with whimpering, moaning and gasping noises. Sasuke wasn't sure who made what sounds. The only thing he understood was that his heart was pounding so hard, his blood rushing south and he wanted to keep feeling this amazing sensation. He could feel Yuusuke's hot, shallow breath on his skin, his heartbeat thumping rhythmically with his own and his name being called in such erotic way that he forgot everything else except the two of them in their own little world.
"Yuusuke, I-…ah!"
"Yeah, yeah, Sasu-ngh!"
And they kept rolling and falling down together... into the mud of forbidden bliss.
~Bossun x Tsubaki~
Himeko stared at the metal door ominously. It had been five hours since Switch, she and the rest of the student council administrators locked both Bossun and Tsubaki in the storage room. She and the others had heard the banging sounds at the first hour and then there was hint of conversation coming from the inside since the second. However, up to two hours prior, the voices had vanished.
"They didn't kill each other did they?" Switch computerized voice asked from behind and Himeko couldn't exactly rule that out because the strain in Bossun and Tsubaki's relationship these days were rather… on edge.
"Maybe we should open the door," Himeko decided.
"Err… but if they work together, they can actually find a way out of this storage, you know," Switch reminded. "That's the main purpose of us locking them up in there in the first place."
"Yeah, but five hours are too long, don't you think?"
"Maybe they have a lot of issues to talk about," Switch shrugged, his hands still busy typing his answer. "Maybe they really need that alone time to understand each other."
"There're a lot of maybes there, Switch. Perhaps they manage to punch each other in the face as well," Himeko made a point and Switch made a sighing sound despite his even expression. "Alright, enough is enough. We should open the-"
But before she finished her sentence, there was a clicking sound on the metal door and it was opened from the inside. "Huh?" Surprisingly, Bossun came out of the room… with Tsubaki on his back, being piggy back lifted. "Himeko, Switch?" He tilted his head, seeming to be confused.
"Onizuka Hime-kun and Switch-kun!" Tsubaki, upon noticing their presence as well, squawked, his face exploding in interesting scarlet color, looking absolutely panicked. "W-wha-what annya doing here?!"
Bossun snorted. "Sasuke, your catty language came out," he commented.
"Shut up! Whose fault do you think it is?!" If it was possible, Tsubaki's voice grew higher and his face color went redder.
"Huh… they seem closer to me," Switch typed his opinion, even raising one of his eyebrows in the process, how rare.
"They're still bickering, but indeed… somethin' seem friendlier…" But that wasn't the only thing Himeko could see. They seemed more… intimate too?
"At least they aren't about to murder each other." Switch shrugged.
"Well, let's count it as a win then!" Himeko cheered in total agreement. She didn't know the strange uneasy feeling she could catch from the way Tsubaki and Bossun interacted with each other, but she would just ignore it for now.
"Wait a damn second. What do you mean by 'count it as a win'? Exactly what were you doing?" Bossun narrowed his eyes at her and Switch suspiciously, and Himeko flinched while Switch typed 'giku' (2) on his laptop.
"Oops?" Himeko laughed sheepishly, backing away slowly while Switch was readying himself to bolt before they started running while wailing "We're sorryyyyyyy!"
"Heeeeey!" Bossun raised his fist, veins of ire popping out of his temples, most likely very annoyed and irritated that Himeko and Switch had been too nosy for sticking their noses in Bossun's private business.
#
On their way back to retrieve Bossun and Sasuke's bags, Sasuke whined.
"It's over… my image…!" He sank and hid his face on Bossun's neck.
Bossun chuckled slightly at that. "At least they have no idea why you're in this condition," he tried to console.
"Not FUNNY at all," Sasuke punched his shoulder as punishment.
"Ow, sorry, sorry, sheesh… don't be so violent on big brother," Bossun was still snickering then.
"What big brother? Big brother wouldn't do something like that to his little brother," Sasuke huffed and Bossun could virtually see his face pinking, both in annoyance and embarrassment.
"You asked for it, remember?"
"You overdid it!"
"Alright, fair enough; we're both in deep shit right now," Bossun admitted. "But… it's only for us, this, what we have, right?" He wanted to hear it once again, that his feelings were reciprocated by his most important person.
There was a brief pause before a tiny answer of "Yeah," was heard from Sasuke's bashful voice and Yuusuke couldn't help grinning in relief and in total happiness.
"Good."
Because, even though this wasn't exactly normal and they wouldn't be able to reveal it to anyone else, they still had each other. They were totally in the same boat and they would never be alone in that regard.
Twin Complex-Continued? ~FIN~
Additional Notes:
1)Seiza: formal sitting position in Japan, with both knees bent and you sit on top of your legs.
2)Giku: sfx/background sound for flinching.
A/N: Alright, so this is sort of, the sequel of Twin Complex. Yeah, they implicitly did it *lol* Sorry, it's not explicit because… yeah, moral issue (as if I had such thing for writing a fic), no, actually I'm not in the mood for smut, so… and if I decide to write smut, I won't be able to post it on ff net, right? *lol* Tell me if this is should be rated M because for me, this is still categorized as heavy T.
So, what do you think? Err… not funny enough? Yeah, I feel the same. You won't believe how many times I remake this piece *sighs* because I feel it's not as funny as the first one, okay? I want it to be fluffy and funny, but the issue is too heavy for it to be fluffy if I want to make it realistic *more sighs*
So, care to give some feedback? I'll be waiting, guys… (Remember, you asked for it. I merely answered to your request)
~ Part A~