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Dark Surrounds Me Part 8

Dec 03, 2008 17:41

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halls_cherry December 4 2008, 00:11:21 UTC

WOAH UPDATE ALREADY?! :O <3

halls_cherry December 4 2008, 00:16:45 UTC

1 word comment:

kinky

XD

pural words comment:

aww well at least they're sort of moving on from the crazydysfunctionalyunnieassperiod ^^

lunarrays December 6 2008, 01:48:27 UTC

yep hopefully no more crazydysfunctionalyunnieass going on in the future.

XD

halls_cherry December 7 2008, 03:21:10 UTC

O.O OH----EM----GEE .......WHAT DO YOU MEAN "hopefuly" O.O

[GASP]

catgirl50001 December 4 2008, 00:12:41 UTC

OMG I really thought jae was going to rape him and badly hurt him. Im relieved!

And OMG i didnt think yunho would enjoy it that much! u have to write later when jae top yunho finally XD

lunarrays December 6 2008, 01:50:09 UTC

i couldn't write a mean Jae -.-
Yunnie likes the kink O.o
we'll see what I can do about a Jae topping chapter. XD

toma_love December 4 2008, 00:19:37 UTC

i just read your whole series and i've caught up. i'm very glad that jaejoong has taken control and wants to show yunho just how badly he had been treated but i'm glad that he never sunk to the low level that yunho did.

update soon XD

lunarrays December 6 2008, 01:52:46 UTC

i had to make sure Jae didn't sink that low, and be able to feel like he got his 'revenge' while he was at it.

wow XD

all the chapters at once...glad you liked the fic ^.^

O_O silverluna_rose December 4 2008, 00:29:28 UTC

GO JAE!!! uh. . .*clears throat* Nicely done. O_O totally wasn't expecting that. I mean I knew Jae wasn't going to hurt him badly but I had no idea THAT was going to happen. Poor Jae still scared of Yunho hurting him. *huggles Jae* Dun worry Jae everything will be alright

Keep up the good work! ^.^

Re: O_O lunarrays December 6 2008, 01:55:35 UTC

YES!!!!
XD
GO JAE!!!
awww, i didn't give enough hints...LOL

yeah, jae still a little afraid of yunho, he may want to do that to yunnie, but, not done to himself.

AHHHH!!!!
I haven't wrote ANYTHING since posting this chapter!! I have been so LAZY!!!!

will update B.O.T.M soon though.

xox_roxygurl December 4 2008, 00:30:11 UTC

saving a spot :)

u didn't put a link on jaeho_detox to your journal ^^

xox_roxygurl December 4 2008, 00:33:54 UTC

awww jae still won't go back with yunnie :( that was scary, for a second i rlly thought yunho was gonna hurt jae again! :O

lunarrays December 6 2008, 01:57:58 UTC

yeah, Jae still trying to get over the past...like he could ever get over it. He may be able to move on but not forget it.

I think Yunho is trying to turn over a new leaf, and be more loving towards Jae.

we'll have to see in the next few chapters -.-