Fic: Cruise Control

[lunacrescent]

Title: Cruise Control
Category: Kpop (Big Bang)
Pairing(s): G-Dragon/Seungri, G-Dragon/T.O.P
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 4000
Summary: "In love, somehow, a man's heart is always either exceeding the speed limit, or getting parked in the wrong place."
Notes: AU - sequel to Momentum (unlocked for a week or so because I hate linking to locked entries

Comments

[mtfanatic]

Happy to see that there is more to this fic
D'awwwww Ri is jealous of TOP, how cute XD
Ooo can't wait for more.

[sapphynashi]

I guess now I'm kind of committed, lol.

Thanks for reading~

[mtfanatic]

Yeah, my roommates are your friends on LJ so they tell me when you mention about your Big Bang fic and I'm like squee awesome. Keep up the good work.

[sapphynashi]

lol I do tend to complain mention this fic a lot. Maybe I should be more careful about not spoiling things, though. XD

[gooddaymoderato]

Ah. I really like all the identities/personalities you gave them... TOP is a bit dense. I'm looking forward to the next installment. Thanks for sharing. :)

[sapphynashi]

Thank you. :D I'm trying to make them complex characters, and more will be revealed as I use different perspectives. :3

[magicmelodyx]

I am thouroughly enjoying the direction this miniseries is taking, largely because it's nice to see a potential threesome that manages to keep the characters involved in-character without fits of ridiculous melodrama.

Jiyong leans back and bumps against Seungri's chest. It reminds him to grin now that the crisis has passed; all he has to do is ride the rest of it out.

I like how subtle that move was. Well, subtle for Jiyong.

He's very cute, but mostly he's comfortable and a few shades of intriguing. He's fun. He's safe. There's a song with his imprint on it, if not his name because that sort of thing trips over the line from poignant to tacky, and if Jiyong is good at anything, it's musical translation. His life is composed of it.

Your way with words, I wish I had it.

[sapphynashi]

Haha, I'm glad, and you know how much I've been agonizing over keeping things in-character and realistic. XD

...Heheheh, I'm kind of looking forward to the next part so we can see just how subtle/not-subtle Jiyong is to people who know him better than Seungri. :3

ajksdfha ♥

[lustfulsister]

I can truly said that I am your fan now~
For real. I love the words you use, I love comparisons and adjectives.
And I can enjoy your writing even if I'm reading it for 10th time.
You win~
I love you <3

[sapphynashi]

Haha, thank you. I'm glad it has replay...or rereading value. XD

[oxygenlove]

hgawrm.
jealousy is always a good word.
really like this sequel...
more...?

[sapphynashi]

Jealousy could make things interesting. :3 I plan to write more!

[oxygenlove]

heck yeah!
i like this AU so much.
i'll be waiting for more!