Fic: Witness (DBSK, Magic and Myth series)

[lunacrescent]

Title: Witness
Category: Kpop (DBSK)
Character(s): Changmin-centric (peripheral YunJae, plus a guest appearance!)
Rating: PG
Word Count: 4300
Summary: Whether or not human nature was inherently good or bad was a question to be debated by other individuals (possibly old men with too much time on their hands), but it was quite clear, at least to one

Comments

[trancepts]

Kyuhyun! No bias at all. I love how snarky the two of them are. Making their math teachers cry. And everything else was awesome too.

[sapphynashi]

Hee, Kyu-bias. ♥ Yes, double the magnae snark. XD Thanks for reading!

[flame_angel88]

This is such a awesome story. First of all, fantasy stories are ALWAYS welcomed by me, there seriously isn't enough fantasy element in fan-fics. The universe you've created is ingenious and not too complicated for me to digest. It makes reading a lot more enjoyable when I don't have to spend hours pondering on the technicalities.

Setting aside, I like the way you've illustrated the dynamics too. No much direct YunJae in this chapter but I can see the trust between them during the test. The KyunMin cracks me up too. XDD

I am looking forward to the next chapter &hearts Hwaiting!

[sapphynashi]

I'm glad you like it~ :D I know that sometimes it's hard to get into fantasy AUs when they're really quite different from the canon, so I hoped this one wasn't too complicated.

Yeah, I wanted to show them from an outside POV and strip things down to the basics. The little nuances of the relationship were all over the place in the last chapter, and they're still present here, just not so confusingly.

Thank you! I hope you'll enjoy the next part when it is finished.

[chaosmyth]

asjgasdjgasdgsadgsdgsadg,sdgsadgsa youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu \\\*0*///

I can't even express how much you make me happy with this series, I really can't ♥ I've never found a good fantasy fic in this fandom (and rarely in my previous ones); I think it's hard to write this genre without either sounding naive or clichéd or unimaginative, but you are succeeding ♥ Your fic has me completely hooked x)

I really, really like this universe, and the way you manage to make it realistic and believable without being *too* descriptive. Your characterization is really good too, they're still recognizable despite this being an AU.

Also, it's interesting how you wrote this from Changmin's pov... you may have done it to take shortcuts with the action scenes, but it worked really well. ;D

I can't wait for the next chapter *O*♥♥♥♥♥♥

[sapphynashi]

I'm glad it's working out for you! I'm looking forward to writing more and expanding on the world. It's still a bit contained right now since I'm only three chapters in, but I have lots more planned. :D

Haha, it took a while, but I am getting much more comfortable with my characterizations now. I used to never be able to write Changmin. Or Yunho, for that matter. XD;

Thanks for commenting, as always! ♥ It may be a few weeks until I can finish the next part, but it should be an extra good chapter to make up for the wait. :3

[misnomeko]

I'm so happy to see an update. I love this series so much~! :D ♥

[sapphynashi]

Thank you! :D I hope you'll continue to enjoy it.

[reallycorking]

I really, really love this series. I'm so intrigued to see where you'll go with it! This particular installment is great--I really like your choice to tell it from Changmin's perspective.

[sapphynashi]

Yay, I'm glad that the POV is working out for people. :D I'm excited to write more in 2009. XD Thank you for reading! ♥