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Fic: Time and Tide (Code Geass)

Aug 20, 2007 13:19

Title: Time and Tide
Category: Code Geass: Lelouch of the Rebellion
Rating: PG
Rough Word Count: 2400
Summary: "Time and tide wait for no man."
Notes: For sephy_elysian in hopes that she'll write more and we begin a vicious cycle.

( The lit-up angles and corners of desk and wall appear knife-edged against the deeper shadows... )

code geass: gen, fic

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sephyelysian August 20 2007, 19:25:02 UTC

This is gorgeous.

I loved the little details, the sights and the scents, the way Suzaku is in motion even when he tries not to be, and of course the princess, that dream he can't quite hold onto. The interaction between he and Lelouch rings true and sums up their relationship so nicely and I love all the foreshadowing you have to the beast Suzaku is hiding inside of himself, all those things he would rather not acknowledge crawling around beneath his skin.

What I love the most is the sense of transformation, of something moving towards completion, a mood you managed to capture so well.

I just...and you wrote it for me and ....asdkfjsdfjkgsdj a.a♥♥♥ This definitely makes me want to finish that piece I'm working on and I'm going to try and see if I can't get it done soon...so it can be your turn again. XD

Thank you. ♥

sapphynashi August 20 2007, 20:14:56 UTC

Uwa, I'm glad you like it. @_@ I've been wanting to use the watch as a theme of sorts and it just sort of...went from there. Suzaku is impossible to rein in once he gets going, isn't he? XD; He jerked me around at the end because apparently my initial idea didn't please him. I've also had those songs you sent me on repeat.

Of course it's for you~ You first mentioned the series a long time ago, and when I came across it I thought I'd give it a download. So my crazed obsession is partly your fault. :D ♥

sephyelysian August 20 2007, 20:18:36 UTC

Suzaku is up there with Ken from Weiss Kreuz, who while not my favorite WK boy, will NOT shut up once he gets started. Suzaku was really that bad for me and just wouldn't let me alone. Oh? Can I ask what your initial idea was? LOL. Glad I could help with the music. XD I need to get the rest of those up for you. ♥ I really do like it though. It's a gorgeous bit of writing and very good character development.

I shall take the blame for this, yes! ♥ But you totally encouraged the Suza/Lulu so that's your fault. XD

sapphynashi August 20 2007, 20:48:05 UTC

Ahh, WK. Any idea when the new season will be out? I'm a little bit scared of the huge cast introduced in the trailer, but so many of them look pretty or cool. XD;

Nothing drastically different, mostly just details and movements. He got very, very specific when handling the watch - in the beginning, too. He's still not totally happy with the taking-off-the-gloves part, but I was tired of messing with the line. Also, I originally planned to include the first two lines of the phone conversation, but he rejected having Lelouch in that scene at all.

XD *is just glad to have a partner in crime*

sephyelysian August 20 2007, 21:44:25 UTC

I have no idea to be perfectly honest. I'm kind of curious myself. I'm thinking not fall. Maybe winter or early spring. Koyasu seems content to take his time. The large cast is a bit daunting though I have to admit, I'm wondering how many of them are going to be canon fodder and how many actual characters. @_@ Then again, maybe it'll work out. They make the large cast in Geass work.

So Lelouch got the Denied macro? XD Seems apt.

Seriously so! XD And we shall flood the fandom and it shall know fear...*cues maniacal laughter* ...or something like that. ^~

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