another editing update

[lunacow]

A month ago I posted that I'd finished editing part 1 of The Overworld. I said at the time that I was going to spend a week making some additional changes before moving on to part 2. Well, in fact I've spent the past month in that pursuit, but now I finally have a beginning that's better, stronger, faster

Comments

[rubrick]

Can't you just delete every third word?

[jellyfrog]

Wow, this all sounds hard. :S Good luck with the trimming!

No bonus points for me. The only reference I got was the Six Million Dollar Man. :P